Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar and use varied vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail and a brief reason using a linking word (e.g., because, so). Avoid repeating words like “in my computer.”

Exemplo: Yes, I see a lot of ads online. For example, when I search for clothing or electronics on my computer, targeted ads for those items often appear, so I end up noticing them frequently.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer (yes or no) and then provide one specific memory or explain briefly why you can't remember. Use correct grammar and linking words like because or so to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Not really — I don't remember any single ad clearly from my childhood because I saw many commercials for baby food and none stood out. However, I do recall colourful jingles that made the ads easy to notice.

Sugestão: Start with a concise topic sentence then give one clear reason and a specific example. Remove hesitations (uh) and tighten sentence structure. Use linking words like because or when to show cause and effect.

Exemplo: Yes, I see many ads on public transport. Because the train station is near my home, I often pass billboards and posters there when I walk or drive by, so the adverts are hard to miss.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion and explain with one concise reason. Fix grammar and pronoun use (avoid "he's"), remove fillers (umm), and finish your thought. Use linking words like but or because.

Exemplo: I don't mind ads in general, but I dislike ones that simply present dry information because they feel boring. Instead, I prefer ads on my phone or computer that are entertaining or relevant to my interests.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence listing types you like, then briefly explain why using a linking word. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "sports", not just "karate" if you mean martial arts) and avoid informal contractions like "wanna" in the test.

Exemplo: I enjoy ads about food, sports such as karate, and entertainment because they are visually engaging and often short, so I can understand them quickly without wasting time.

× I usually see advertisement on my computer because in my computer I usually try to find shop online or something that I need.

✓ I usually see advertisements on my computer because on my computer I usually try to find shops online or something that I need.

Use plural forms for countable nouns when speaking generally. 'Advertisement' and 'shop' should be plural ('advertisements', 'shops') because the speaker means multiple ads and multiple shops. Also use 'on my computer' consistently instead of 'in my computer'. Suggestion: when referring to multiple items, use the plural form (add -s).

× So I always get advertisements depending on my searches.

✓ So I always get advertisements based on my searches.

The phrase 'depending on' is not incorrect grammatically but 'based on' is more natural here. No present participle change required; corrected for natural phrasing while preserving tense. Suggestion: prefer 'based on' to express cause or source of ads.

× Well I couldn't remember but I saw many advertise her about her child's food so probably I just remember that but not like impression.

✓ Well, I couldn't remember, but I saw many advertisements about baby food, so I probably just remember them, but they didn't leave an impression on me.

Multiple issues: 'couldn't remember' is past modal of inability—acceptable for recalling; 'saw many advertise her' is incorrect word forms and pronouns. Use plural 'advertisements' and correct object 'about baby food'. Use 'them' to refer to 'advertisements' and 'didn't leave an impression on me' for clearer expression. Suggestion: match noun forms and use pronouns that agree in number; use idiomatic expressions like 'leave an impression'.

× Uh, I usually see advertising on trains because the trains are closer to my house, so when I walk in on the street or driving next to the train station, I can see some advertising there.

✓ I usually see advertising on trains because the train station is close to my house, so when I walk on the street or drive past the station, I can see some advertisements there.

Preposition and article issues: 'the trains are closer to my house' is odd—use 'the train station is close to my house'. Use 'walk on the street' not 'walk in on the street'. Use 'drive past' instead of 'driving next to'. Also 'advertising' -> plural 'advertisements' for countable instances. Suggestion: use correct prepositions for movement (walk on, drive past) and match singular/plural nouns appropriately.

× Yes I do, but I don't really like when he's about umm information, necessary information because I don't feel like very interesting about it so I just prefer to watch on my phone or computer about my.

✓ Yes, I do, but I don't really like ads that are about necessary information because I don't find them very interesting, so I prefer to look at other things on my phone or computer.

Pronoun 'he's' is incorrect; should refer to 'ads' or 'they'. 'I don't feel like very interesting' is ungrammatical — use 'I don't find them very interesting'. 'Prefer to watch on my phone or computer about my.' is incomplete and awkward; 'look at other things on my phone or computer' is clearer. Suggestion: refer back to nouns with correct pronouns ('they' for ads) and use 'find + adjective' to express opinion; complete the clause to specify what you prefer.

× I like karate, food or entertainment that I can focus on it, but I don't really wanna spend time watching advertisement.

✓ I like advertisements about sports, food, or entertainment that I can focus on, but I don't really want to spend time watching ads.

Conjunction/list formatting: use parallel items and clearer nouns. 'Karate' is a single example of sports; better to say 'sports'. Avoid ending relative clause with 'on it'—use 'that I can focus on'. 'Wanna' is informal; use 'want to'. 'Advertisement' should be plural 'ads'. Suggestion: keep lists parallel, use standard vocabulary in tests ('want to' not 'wanna'), and ensure verb forms and pronouns are consistent.