Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions, correct minor grammar (singular/plural, articles), and add one specific example to support your point. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use a linking phrase.

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone because they help me learn about new products. For example, I recently discovered a new app through a targeted ad that solved a problem I had with photo editing.

Sugestão: Be specific about a single memorable advertisement and avoid filler words ('uh'). Use past tense consistently and include why it impressed you. Limit to 2–3 clear sentences and use a linking word to explain the reason.

Exemplo: Yes, one TV advert for a children's bicycle impressed me when I was young because of its catchy jingle and bright colours. Because of that ad, I remember asking my parents for that exact bike for months.

Sugestão: Clarify your meaning and correct grammar. State your main idea first, then provide a specific reason and an example. Avoid sentence fragments and be careful with word choice (e.g., 'listen to music' and 'playful dramas' or 'podcasts').

Exemplo: Not really — I rarely notice ads on trains because I usually listen to music or podcasts while travelling. For instance, on my commute I prefer listening to Spotify, so I pay little attention to posters or billboards.

Sugestão: Make the statement more natural and concise. Use plural/singular correctly and avoid repetition. Give one specific reason and an example to support your opinion, using a linking phrase such as 'for example' or 'for instance'.

Exemplo: Yes, I do — advertisements help me discover new products and sales. For example, an online ad recently alerted me to a discount on running shoes that I ended up buying.

Sugestão: Be more organized and use correct article forms ('an advertisement') and plural forms. Group related items and give a reason using a linking word. Provide a brief example of a preferred ad style (e.g., visual, informative).

Exemplo: I prefer ads for makeup and clothing, especially those showcasing outfits for weddings or parties, because they give ideas for styling. For instance, a short video ad showing different party looks with outfit and makeup tips is very helpful.

× Yes, I often see advertisement when I use my phone because it helps me to know about new things and new items in the in the market.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone because they help me to learn about new things and new items in the market.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural ('advertisements') because 'I often see' implies multiple instances. Also pronoun agreement: refer back to 'advertisements' with 'they' not 'it'. 'Helps me to know about' is awkward; 'help me to learn about' is more natural. Remove the duplicated 'in the'.

× Yes, when I was a child I saw many advertisement on TV and laptop.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I saw many advertisements on TV and on laptops.

Use plural 'advertisements' after 'many'. Also 'laptop' should be plural or marked with an article; 'on laptops' is natural when speaking generally.

× It helps me to uh, locate new places and and it helped me to uh, know about new things.

✓ They helped me to locate new places and to learn about new things.

Mixed tense: the sentence begins 'It helps' (present) but context is past ('when I was a child'). Use past tense 'helped'. Also refer to 'advertisements' with 'they' and keep parallel structure: 'helped me to locate' and 'helped me to learn'. Remove filler repetitions.

× I do not watch any advertisement on trains or other transport because during travelling I want to listen music and other. Play full dramas.

✓ I do not see advertisements on trains or other transport because during travelling I want to listen to music and watch plays or dramas.

'Watch' or 'see' is more appropriate than 'watch any advertisement' on transport; 'advertisements' should be plural. 'During travelling' is acceptable but 'while travelling' is more natural. 'Listen music' needs the preposition 'to'. The fragment 'Play full dramas.' is not a complete clause; combine into 'watch plays or dramas.' This fixes sentence structure and missing preposition.

× Yes, I like advertisement because through advertisement I I come to know about new items and new product launching in a market.

✓ Yes, I like advertisements because through them I learn about new items and new product launches in the market.

Use plural 'advertisements' and refer back with 'them'. 'I come to know about' is awkward; 'I learn about' is natural. 'New product launching' should be 'new product launches' for plural form and correct noun usage. Add 'the' before 'market' for specificity.

× I prefer to see a advertisement of makeup, clothes and other different kind of things about weddings and functions and birthday parties.

✓ I prefer to see advertisements of makeup, clothes, and other kinds of things for weddings, functions, and birthday parties.

Use plural 'advertisements' not 'a advertisement'. 'Kind' should be plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types, and use 'of' after 'kinds'. Use commas to separate items and 'for' to indicate purpose (weddings, functions, birthday parties). 'Different' is redundant with 'other' so remove one.