Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and organized: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific examples with brief reasons. Use simple correct grammar and linking words (for example, "for example", "because"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes. Food commercials made the biggest impression on me as a child. For example, chocolate and ice cream ads looked very colorful and made me want to buy them because they showed happy children eating the products. Therefore, I often asked my parents to buy those snacks after seeing the adverts.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give concise, specific details: name the modes of transport and types of ads you notice. Use linking words like "for example" or "mostly" and avoid vague phrases. Keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

Exemplo: Yes, I see many advertisements on public transport. For example, buses and trains often have posters and digital screens showing food products and music promotions. Mostly these are colorful posters placed above the seats or on the carriage walls.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion, then give two precise reasons with examples. Use linking words ("because", "for example", "also") and correct noun forms ("skincare", "haircare"). Avoid repeating phrases like "very attractive" multiple times.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I find skincare and haircare ads useful because they introduce new products and explain their benefits. For example, a shampoo ad might show ingredients and results, and food ads help me discover new snacks I want to try.

Sugestão: Be specific and concise: state the types you prefer, then explain why with one or two concrete examples. Avoid fillers like "uh" and incorrect phrases (say "newly launched products"). Use linking words like "because" and "also" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer skincare advertisements because they explain product benefits, such as how a new sunscreen protects skin from UV rays. I also like food ads, especially when they show a new snack or healthy product and explain its ingredients.

Sugestão: Answer clearly with correct tense and structure: say whether you often see ads on phone or computer, then give specific types of ads and where they appear (e.g., during videos, on websites). Use linking words like "when" and "while" and avoid confusing phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I often see ads on my phone, especially short video ads that play before or during TV shows and social media videos. On my computer I usually see music-related ads or banner ads on streaming sites rather than product commercials.

× Yes, of course there are a lot of the advertisements who extraction make the expression on me when I was strike when I would talk about the food items such as food, the chocolates, canteens, ice creams, they are very attractive for me at my childhood.

✓ Yes, of course there were a lot of advertisements that left an impression on me when I was a child; for example, ads for chocolates, canteens, and ice cream were very attractive to me.

Errors: plural/singular and count noun usage ('a lot of the advertisements' -> 'a lot of advertisements'), incorrect relative pronoun ('who' -> 'that'), wrong verb choices ('extraction make the expression on me' -> 'left an impression on me'), wrong time phrase ('when I was strike' -> 'when I was a child'). Suggestion: Use correct plural forms and common collocations (leave an impression), use 'that' for things, and simplify the clause order for clarity.

× I usually get the good expression to buy them from whenever see any advertisement.

✓ I usually felt a strong desire to buy them whenever I saw an advertisement.

Errors: tense and verb forms ('get the good expression to buy' is unnatural; 'whenever see' lacks subject and past tense). Suggestion: Use past tense 'felt' and include subject with past verb 'saw'; replace awkward phrases with natural collocations like 'felt a desire to buy'.

× Yes, I see a lot of the advertisement in on the another transplant such as a bus and a car.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on other transport, such as buses and cars.

Errors: 'a lot of the advertisement' should be plural 'a lot of advertisements'; wrong prepositions ('in on the another transplant' -> 'on other transport'); incorrect singular/plural for vehicles ('a bus and a car' -> 'buses and cars') and misspelling ('transplant' -> 'transport'). Suggestion: Use plural forms for general statements and correct prepositions: 'on other transport' or 'on buses and cars'.

× Usually I see the music advertisements and about some here advertisements and another food products advertisements.

✓ Usually I see music advertisements and other ads for various food products.

Errors: incorrect pronouns and determiners ('and about some here advertisements' is ungrammatical) and redundant words. Suggestion: Use 'other' to contrast categories and 'ads' or 'advertisements' consistently; simplify to 'ads for various food products.'

× Yeah, usually and basically seen in another transport.

✓ Yes, they are usually seen on other forms of transport.

Errors: sentence lacks subject and correct verb form ('seen' needs auxiliary and subject). Suggestion: Include a subject ('they') and auxiliary verb ('are') and correct preposition ('on other forms of transport').

× Yes, of course I like the advertisements such as the ads of the skin care.

✓ Yes, of course I like advertisements, such as ads for skin care products.

Errors: unnecessary definite articles ('the advertisements', 'the ads of the skin care') and wrong noun phrase order. Suggestion: Use 'ads for skin care products' and omit 'the' for general preferences.

× Hair care are very attractive and useful for the consumers.

✓ Hair care products are very attractive and useful to consumers.

Errors: subject-verb agreement with 'Hair care are' (should be plural noun 'products' with 'are'), and wrong preposition 'for the consumers' -> 'to consumers'. Suggestion: Use 'hair care products' and 'useful to consumers.'

× And I also prefer that advertisements of food products because I usually know the new products with the help of advertisement.

✓ I also prefer advertisements for food products because I usually learn about new products through advertisements.

Errors: incorrect demonstrative 'that advertisements' and article use ('the help of advertisement' -> 'through advertisements'); word choice 'know' -> 'learn about'. Suggestion: Use 'advertisements for' and the verb phrase 'learn about' plus plural 'advertisements.'

× Uh, I like the most of the advertisement about the skin cares because, uh, I'll, uh, learn, I get the knowledge about the new launched product such as through the, uh, sunscreen prints and another creams, which are good and very attractive for the consumers.

✓ I like most advertisements about skin care because I learn about newly launched products through sunscreen print ads and other creams, which are appealing to consumers.

Errors: article and quantifier misuse ('the most of the advertisement' -> 'most advertisements'), awkward tense/modal use ('I'll, learn, I get the knowledge' -> 'I learn'), incorrect adjective order ('new launched product' -> 'newly launched products'), and pluralization. Suggestion: Use 'most advertisements', 'learn about', 'newly launched products', and concise phrasing.

× And on the another hand, I also like the food advertisements such as, uh, new food product, which are launched by the FSS.

✓ On the other hand, I also like food advertisements for new food products, which are launched by the FSS.

Errors: wrong article and phrase order ('on the another hand' -> 'on the other hand'), singular/plural mismatch ('new food product, which are' -> 'new food products, which are'), and article misuse. Suggestion: Use 'on the other hand' and ensure subject and verb number agree.

× I usually see the advertisements when I was the any TV serials on mobile phone and there were just some short advertisements of the products and another investments of money.

✓ I usually see advertisements when I watch TV serials on my mobile phone, and there are just some short ads about products or financial investments.

Errors: tense mismatch ('I usually see' with past 'when I was'), incorrect article/determiner ('the any TV serials'), and awkward noun phrase 'another investments of money'. Suggestion: Keep present tense for habitual actions ('when I watch'), use 'ads' and 'financial investments' for clarity.

× But on the other hand if I use the computer at that time I see the music advertisements not on the product advice advertisement.

✓ But if I use the computer, I usually see music advertisements rather than product ads.

Errors: redundant 'on the other hand' with 'but' and awkward phrasing ('at that time I see the music advertisements not on the product advice advertisement'). Suggestion: Streamline conjunctions ('But if...' or 'On the other hand, if...') and use 'rather than' to contrast, with 'product ads' for clarity.