Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the ad, then give one or two specific details (what it showed and how it made you feel). Use correct tense and countable/uncountable forms, and avoid filler words like "uh."

Exemplo: A television advertisement for a skin-care brand impressed me when I was a child. It promised a fairer complexion and showed before-and-after images, which made me curious and talk about it with my friends.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then add a specific example. Correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "for example" to organize details.

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements when I travel by the Delhi Metro. For example, the train interiors and station walls are covered with posters for mobile phones and local services, and I usually read them to learn about new products.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid vague phrasing. Use clearer vocabulary (companies, brands, products) and give one specific reason with an example. Remove fillers and redundant phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I like advertisements because they inform me about new products and promotions. For example, a short ad about a bestselling smartphone helped me compare features before buying.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence describing the type of ads, then explain why using a specific detail. Use correct relative pronouns and phrasing (ads that are aimed at Gen Z). Replace fillers and awkward structures.

Exemplo: I prefer creative advertisements that use Gen Z language and slang because they feel relatable and catch my attention. For instance, an Instagram video using current slang and memes made me more interested in the brand.

Sugestão: Give a concise direct answer then add a specific example. Improve grammar (say "I often see advertisements"), and name platforms or formats (social media, influencers). Avoid repetition and filler words.

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone, especially on social media. For example, Instagram influencers frequently post sponsored content and short ads that promote fashion and tech products.

× There are a lot of advertisement that made an impression when I was child, but uh, I would like to talk about a specific one.

✓ There were a lot of advertisements that made an impression when I was a child, but I would like to talk about a specific one.

Error: 'a lot of advertisement' uses singular 'advertisement' after a quantifier that requires a plural noun. Also 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a'. Suggestion: Use the plural 'advertisements' with 'a lot of' and add 'a' before 'child'. Use past tense 'were' to match 'when I was a child'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× There is a advertisement on television for a Daily Show and which tells that it will make you more fair complexion and I was really.

✓ There was an advertisement on television for a daily show that said it would make your complexion fairer, and I was really impressed.

Errors: 'There is a advertisement' should be 'There was an advertisement' (article 'an' before vowel sound and past tense to match 'when I was a child'). 'a Daily Show' is ambiguous; use lowercase 'daily show' if generic. 'which tells that' is incorrect relative clause and tense; use 'that said'. 'make you more fair complexion' is ungrammatical; use 'make your complexion fairer'. Sentence ends incomplete: add 'impressed' to finish thought. Suggestion: Use correct article 'an', past tense 'was', appropriate relative clause 'that said', and comparative form 'fairer'. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× I live in Delhi and in Delhi metro. There are a lot of advertisement holdings in Delhi metro inside the metro and I was.

✓ I live in Delhi and use the Delhi Metro. There are a lot of advertisements inside the metro,

Errors: 'a lot of advertisement holdings' is incorrect: 'advertisements' should be plural. 'Delhi metro' should be 'Delhi Metro' (proper noun) and 'inside the metro' suffices; 'holdings' is wrong word. The trailing 'and I was.' is incomplete and should be removed or completed. Suggestion: Use 'advertisements' plural and simplify phrasing to 'inside the metro'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I am a person who used to see all the advertisement and read go through with the main idea of the advertisement.

✓ I am a person who usually sees all the advertisements and goes through the main idea of each advertisement.

Errors: Tense and verb agreement: 'used to see' implies past habitual; speaker intends general habit, so use 'usually sees'. 'advertisement' should be plural. 'read go through with' is ungrammatical; use 'goes through' or 'reads and understands' and ensure subject-verb agreement 'goes'. Suggestion: Use present habitual 'usually sees' and ensure verbs agree with singular 'who' referring to 'a person'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× So I really enjoys reading them.

✓ So I really enjoy reading them.

Error: Subject-verb agreement/adverb usage: 'I enjoys' is incorrect; with subject 'I' the verb should be 'enjoy'. Remove unnecessary 'really' placement is fine. Suggestion: Use 'I enjoy' for correct subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× To be more precisely, I really like advertisement because it helps me to gain more knowledge about the specific company or maybe brand or maybe, uh, specific, uh, product which is hot seller in the market and it uh, gives me, uh, proper experience while reading.

✓ To be more precise, I really like advertisements because they help me gain more knowledge about a specific company, brand, or product that is a hot seller in the market, and they give me a better idea when I read them.

Errors: 'To be more precisely' should be 'To be more precise' (adverb/adjective misuse). 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'. Pronoun agreement: use 'they' to refer to 'advertisements'. 'helps me to gain' -> 'help me gain' for plural. 'which is hot seller' -> 'that is a hot seller' or 'a best seller' and include article 'a'. 'proper experience while reading' is awkward; use 'a better idea' or 'a proper sense'. Suggestion: Use correct adjective/adverb forms, plural nouns with matching pronouns, and smoother phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× I like a certain kind of advertisement who, who's uh, who is more, uh, creative and more likely to Gen. Z's language and slangs so it will more understandable for me to recognize them.

✓ I like a certain kind of advertisement that is more creative and uses Gen Z language and slang, so it is easier for me to understand and recognize them.

Errors: Use 'that' or 'which' for things, not 'who'. 'Gen. Z's language and slangs' should be 'Gen Z language and slang' (no possessive, 'slang' uncountable). 'so it will more understandable' is ungrammatical; use 'so it is easier for me to understand'. Suggestion: Use correct relative pronoun 'that' for ads, correct noun forms 'Gen Z language and slang', and proper comparative structure 'easier to understand'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× In today's fast-paced environment, there are a lot of convenience to see advertisement for a specific brand on social media.

✓ In today's fast-paced environment, it is very convenient to see advertisements for a specific brand on social media.

Errors: 'there are a lot of convenience' is incorrect: 'convenience' is uncountable and this structure is wrong. Use 'it is convenient' or 'there are a lot of convenient ways'. 'see advertisement' should be 'see advertisements' plural. Suggestion: Use 'it is convenient' and pluralize 'advertisements'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× For example, there are a lot of influencer marketing there or promoting, promoting their products, uh, on the social media Instagram.

✓ For example, there is a lot of influencer marketing, and many influencers promote their products on social media like Instagram.

Errors: 'there are a lot of influencer marketing' mixes plural structure with uncountable 'influencer marketing' or should be 'a lot of influencer marketing' singular. Better: 'there is a lot of influencer marketing' or rephrase to 'many influencers promote'. 'on the social media Instagram' should be 'on social media like Instagram' or simply 'on Instagram'. Suggestion: Use correct agreement for 'a lot of' with uncountable nouns or rephrase to plural 'many influencers'. Grammar problem type ID: 1}]}ailability