Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答需要更直接、连贯并纠正用词错误（如“adverse”应为"advertisement"或不使用“adverse”表示负面）。开头给出主题句，然后用1-2句具体描述广告内容和为何印象深刻，使用连接词使句子更流畅。注意避免填充词（如"uh"）并把句子简化到五句以内。

Exemplo: Yes. One jingle for a jelly brand stuck with me when I was a child. The ad showed colorful jars and children laughing, which made the product look delicious. Because the tune was catchy, I remembered the brand name for years.

Sugestão: 回答较直接，但需改进表达的自然性和语法（例如"in my daily life I seldom see"和"limit on the number of advertisements"）。可以增加一两个具体细节说明在何种情况下会看到广告或举例，从而使内容更具体并使用连接词。

Exemplo: Not really. In my daily life I seldom see advertising on trains because there are strict rules about outdoor ads in my city. Occasionally I notice posters at major stations, but they are uncommon on suburban buses.

Sugestão: 回答有观点但表达不够自然，词汇搭配不准确（如"specialized situation"可改为"the situation"，结尾不完整）。建议先给明确立场，然后用一两个具体例子和原因支持，使用连接词如"for example"或"because"并完成句子。

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. For example, when I go to a shopping mall I appreciate food adverts because they help me decide where to eat and what to try next.

Sugestão: 观点明确但句子结构和语法需改进（例如"this kind of ads"应为"this kind of ad"或"these ads"，"helps me to make choices"）。建议使用更地道的词组并给出具体例子说明为何喜欢这种广告，保持句子简洁。

Exemplo: I prefer simple, honest ads. These are easy to understand and often give useful information like opening hours or menu specials, so I can quickly decide where to eat.

Sugestão: 回答有信息但分段不连贯，且有用词和语法问题（如不应以句子短语开头"Because..."独立成句，"softwares"应为"apps"或"software"）。建议合并成一到两句，说明原因并举例（如使用浏览器或社 media 广告），避免重复表达。

Exemplo: No, I don't see many ads on my devices because I mostly use my phone for calls and messaging. I rarely browse social media or streaming apps where most ads appear.

× It looks very delicious and, uh, it's a slogan. Always cheered me up, moreover.

✓ It looked very delicious, and its slogan always cheered me up.

原句中时态和代词使用不当。“It looks”与前句“I was a child”时间不一致，应改为过去时“looked”。“it's a slogan. Always cheered me up, moreover.”为断句不当且代词不明确，改为“its slogan always cheered me up”更连贯。建议：注意上下文时态一致，避免不完整的句子，把代词与先行词连成完整句。

× there seems to be a limit on advertisements numbers.

✓ there seems to be a limit on the number of advertisements.

原句中“advertisements numbers”词序和搭配错误，英文中应使用“the number of + 名词”表示数量限制，并在“number”前加定冠词。建议：学习常用数量表达（the number of, a lot of, many, few）及其固定结构。

× I think it depends on the specialized situation.

✓ I think it depends on the specific situation.

原句中用词“specialized situation”不自然，且“it depends on the specialized situation”中的代词“it”含义模糊。用“specific situation”更贴切。建议：选择更自然的形容词并避免模糊的代词用法。

× It helps me to make a choice about.

✓ It helps me make a choice.

原句结尾的“about”多余，造成句子不完整。英语中“help someone (to) do something”结构后不需要加“about”。建议：复习动词短语结构，避免多余介词。

× I like the kind of simple, concise and truthful advertising in my daily lives because this kind of ads always helps me to makes choice about where to go and what to eat.

✓ I like simple, concise, and truthful advertising in my daily life because these ads always help me decide where to go and what to eat.

原句有多处问题：1) “the kind of”重复且冗长，可去掉；2) “advertising in my daily lives”中“lives”应为不可数短语“daily life”；3) “this kind of ads”主谓和数不一致，应为“these ads”或“this kind of ad”; 4) “helps me to makes choice about”语法错误，动词形式与搭配错误，改为“help me decide”。建议：注意单复数一致、不可数名词用法，以及动词搭配和形式。

× I rarely see many advertisements on my phone and computer.

✓ I rarely see many advertisements on my phone or computer.

“on my phone and computer”在此处可用“or”更常见，因通常指其中之一。原句语义上冲突：rarely 与 many 连用可能导致混淆（rarely see many = 很少看到很多广告），更自然表达可为“I don't see many advertisements on my phone or computer”或“I rarely see advertisements on my phone or computer”。建议：根据想表达的含义选择“rarely”或“don't ... many”，并注意并列连接词（and/or）。

× Because I usually use my phone to call my friends or parents, I seldom use much other softwares.

✓ Because I usually use my phone to call my friends or parents, I seldom use other software.

原句中“much other softwares”有两处错误：1) “software”在英文中通常作为不可数名词，不能加复数“softwares”；2) 与不可数名词搭配应用“much”或“any”，但更自然的是直接用“other software”。建议：记住不可数名词的单复数用法及与量词的搭配。