Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答要直接且条理清楚。避免语气词和重复，使用一到两句话表达主题，然后用一两句具体说明原因或变化。例如说明小时候的梦想、后来为什么改变以及现在的目标。注意语法时态（过去和现在），用词更准确（e.g. social worker 而不是 per social assistance）。

Exemplo: When I was a child, I wanted to be a scientist or a doctor because I enjoyed science at school. Later I changed my mind and now I want to work as a social worker in the field of sociology because I want to help vulnerable people.

Sugestão: 回答要更连贯并使用连接词来组织信息。避免重复（e.g. "share" 多次）。给出具体例子说明你如何分享或从别人那里得到启发，并完成句子不要中断。

Exemplo: Yes, I often talk about my dreams with close friends and we exchange different viewpoints. For example, a friend who wants to be a teacher gave me practical advice about working with young people, which helped me refine my own plans.

Sugestão: 要更具体且条理清晰地陈述观点和例子。先直接回答（Yes/No）并给出原因，然后用简洁的例子说明感受。注意句子结构和代词使用，避免断句和多余词。

Exemplo: Yes, I think dreams often reflect people's values and motivations. For instance, I saw a short video about a girl who wanted to become a doctor because her mother was ill; that story showed me how personal experiences can inspire someone's career choice.

Sugestão: 回答要直接并包含具体计划或步骤，避免重复和语法错误。用一两句话说出目标，再用一两句说明具体措施和动机（如留学、通过IELTS、找工作、让父母骄傲）。注意时态和名词所有格（parents will be proud）。

Exemplo: Yes, I definitely want to make my dream come true. I plan to study abroad and pass the IELTS so I can get better job opportunities; achieving this would allow me to support my parents and make them proud.

× Definitely when I was a child, I really want to be a scientist or, and, or a doctor in the future about actually, uh, I performed a lot very good in these fields. So I changed my idea. Nowadays, I really want to be, uh, per social assistance in this sociology fields.

✓ Definitely, when I was a child, I really wanted to be a scientist or a doctor. Actually, I performed very well in related subjects, so I changed my mind. Nowadays, I really want to work in social assistance in the field of sociology.

问题类型：现在时/过去时混用和时态不一致。原句中“when I was a child”是过去时间状语，后面却用现在时“I really want”，应使用过去时“wanted”。此外存在用词和搭配错误（performed very good → performed very well; changed my idea → changed my mind; per social assistance / in this sociology fields → work in social assistance in the field of sociology）。建议：根据时间状语一致使用过去或现在时，注意副词和形容词用法（well 用于修饰动词），以及常用搭配（change one’s mind; work in social assistance; in the field of sociology）。

× Yes, definitely I'll always share my own dreams to my close friends and they are always share their dreams to me and we can share our different viewpoints.

✓ Yes, definitely I'll always share my own dreams with my close friends and they always share their dreams with me, so we can share different viewpoints.

问题类型：介词使用错误。英语中常用动词share搭配介词with表示与某人分享，而不是share to。还存在语序和时态一致问题（they are always share → they always share）。建议：使用固定搭配“share ... with ...”，并保持动词时态和语序正确。

× Love these dreams. Uh, I always interested in other streams because I can compare about our fields and if it's it's close, uh, we can.

✓ I love these dreams. I am always interested in other streams because I can compare our fields, and if they are similar, we can discuss them further.

问题类型：现在时态和语态问题。原句省略主语并用不完整的结构（Love these dreams），应补主语“I love”。“I always interested”缺少be动词，应为“I am always interested”。“compare about our fields”中compare不需要介词about，应直接比较“compare our fields”。另外“it's it's close”应为“they are similar”以指代复数名词。建议：完整表达主语和be动词，使用正确动词搭配，保持代词与名词的一致。

× Yes, dreams have many different meanings. For example, last summer I watched a short video online as a girl who is coming to the university. That's really how want to be a doctor in the future because of her mom is ill, the so she can she want to be a doctor to save the more lives. I was so moved.

✓ Yes, dreams have many different meanings. For example, last summer I watched a short video online about a girl who was going to university. She really wanted to become a doctor because her mother was ill, and she wanted to be a doctor to save more lives. I was so moved.

问题类型：过去时使用不当与从句时态不一致。描述过去的事件（last summer, watched）从句也应使用过去时（who was going / she really wanted）。另外句子中有多余或错误词序（that's really how want → she really wanted; because of her mom is ill, the so → because her mother was ill, and）。建议：叙述过去事件时从句保持过去时，删去多余词，调整语序为自然表达。

× Oh yes, absolutely. I really want to make my dream come true. I really want to go abroad to get a further study and pass the IELTS exams so that I can gain good job opportunities and that can reward it to my parents and my parents will proud of me, I will feel really happiness about it.

✓ Oh yes, absolutely. I really want to make my dream come true. I want to go abroad for further study and pass the IELTS exam so that I can gain good job opportunities, repay my parents, and make them proud of me. I will feel very happy about that.

问题类型：情态动词/固定搭配和名词/形容词使用问题。短语“get a further study”不地道，应为“go abroad for further study”。“IELTS exams”通常用单数“the IELTS exam”或“IELTS exams”视语境，但更自然为“the IELTS exam”。“that can reward it to my parents”搭配错误，应为“repay my parents”或“reward my parents”，且不加it。“my parents will proud of me”缺少be动词，应为“my parents will be proud of me”。“I will feel really happiness”错误应为“I will feel very happy”。建议：使用常见搭配（go abroad for further study; repay/ make parents proud），注意be动词和形容词、副词的正确使用。