Mirrors— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 「looking myself in front of the mirror」は不自然なので、「looking at myself in the mirror」と言います。また、「clean on my face」「a bit allergy」「clean all of the pimples」は、それぞれ「clean my face」「a slight skin allergy」「treat my pimples」などが自然です。回答が一文に長くつながっているため、最初に好みと頻度を直接述べ、その後に理由を2文程度で加えると、より明確で効果的です。

Exemplo: I don’t really like looking at myself in the mirror, so I only do it a few times a day. I usually check my face when I wash it or treat my pimples because I have a slight skin allergy. I try to take good care of my skin.

Sugestão: 「bought mirror」には冠詞が必要で、「bought a mirror」とします。「when I close by the mirror」は「when I stand close to it」、「LED function automatically」は「an automatic LED light」のように表現すると自然です。「paws on my stain」は意味が不明確なので、おそらく「pores and skin blemishes」など、意図した内容に合う単語を使ってください。購入理由を最初に明確に述べ、具体的な使用目的を続けるとよいです。

Exemplo: Yes, I once bought a mirror with built-in LED lights. I chose it because the lights make it easier to check my skin closely, especially when I have blemishes. It is particularly useful when I clean my face at night.

Sugestão: 「No, not really」の後にコンマを置き、文を分けると聞き取りやすくなります。「I cannot see any time I can take the mirror out」は不自然なので、「I rarely need to take one out and check my face」と表現できます。また、「I've rather directly used」は「I’d rather use」、「facial status」は「appearance」または「how I look」が自然です。スマートフォンを使うという対比を linking word の「instead」で明確に示してください。

Exemplo: No, not really. I rarely carry a mirror because I don’t usually need to check my face when I’m outside. Instead, I use my phone’s front camera if I want to see how I look.

Sugestão: 質問は仮定について尋ねているため、「I don’t have this type of chance」ではなく、まず「Probably not」または「I wouldn’t」と直接答えるとよいです。「the house that I rent」は「a rented house」、「domestic artist」はこの文脈では不自然なので、「interior designer」または「good at interior decoration」とします。「help one」は誤りで、「use one」または「buy one」が適切です。賃貸で自由に改装できないことと、装飾への関心が低いことを、2〜3文で簡潔に説明してください。

Exemplo: Probably not. I live in a rented house, so I can’t make major changes to the interior. Also, I’m not very interested in interior decoration, so I’d rather spend money on more practical items.

× I don't like looking myself in front of the mirror unless I need to clean on my face and wear a mask or clean all of the pimples because I really had a bit allergy of my skin so I really need to take care of it carefully.

✓ I don't like looking at myself in front of the mirror unless I need to clean my face, wear a mask, or clean my pimples because I have a slight skin allergy, so I need to take care of it carefully.

The verb look requires the preposition at when it is followed by an object, so looking at myself is correct. Clean my face is also correct; clean on my face is not used in English.

× I don't like looking myself in front of the mirror unless I need to clean on my face and wear a mask or clean all of the pimples because I really had a bit allergy of my skin so I really need to take care of it carefully.

✓ I don't like looking at myself in front of the mirror unless I need to clean my face, wear a mask, or clean my pimples because I have a slight skin allergy, so I need to take care of it carefully.

The allergy is a current or continuing condition, so use the present tense have rather than the past tense had. Use have a slight skin allergy to describe the condition naturally.

× I don't like looking myself in front of the mirror unless I need to clean on my face and wear a mask or clean all of the pimples because I really had a bit allergy of my skin so I really need to take care of it carefully.

✓ I don't like looking at myself in front of the mirror unless I need to clean my face, wear a mask, or clean my pimples because I have a slight skin allergy, so I need to take care of it carefully.

Allergy is a countable singular noun in this sentence, so it needs a suitable determiner. A slight skin allergy is the natural form. The phrase a bit allergy is incorrect.

× Yes, I once bought mirror and the only reason is it has the LED function automatically when I close by the mirror.

✓ Yes, I once bought a mirror, and the reason was that it had an LED function that turned on automatically when I got close to the mirror.

A singular countable noun such as mirror needs an article, so use a mirror. LED function also needs the article an because LED begins with a vowel sound.

× Yes, I once bought mirror and the only reason is it has the LED function automatically when I close by the mirror.

✓ Yes, I once bought a mirror, and the reason was that it had an LED function that turned on automatically when I got close to the mirror.

Close by is not the correct expression for movement toward a mirror in this context. Use get close to the mirror, where to introduces the object of the movement.

× No, not really I actually don't like to take any mirror because I cannot see any time I can take the mirror out and check my face outside. I've rather directly used the camera in my phone and to check my facial status.

✓ No, not really. I don't like taking a mirror with me because I cannot use it to check my face when I am outside. I would rather use the camera on my phone to check my face.

The original answer contains several clauses joined without clear structure, and the phrase I cannot see any time I can take the mirror is difficult to understand grammatically. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and use a clear infinitive structure: use the camera to check my face.

× No, not really I actually don't like to take any mirror because I cannot see any time I can take the mirror out and check my face outside. I've rather directly used the camera in my phone and to check my facial status.

✓ No, not really. I don't like taking a mirror with me because I cannot use it to check my face when I am outside. I would rather use the camera on my phone directly to check my face.

The adverbs rather and directly are awkwardly placed in the original sentence. In I would rather use, rather comes after the modal subject structure. Directly can be placed before the purpose phrase or after the object without interrupting the main verb.

× No, I don't have this type of chance because currently I stay in the house that I rent and I cannot change the whole design of the house by myself. And also I'm not a domestic artist, so it's not that necessary for me to help one.

✓ No, I don't have this opportunity because I currently live in a rented house, and I cannot change its entire design by myself. Also, I am not an interior designer, so it is not necessary for me to install a mirror.

The final sentence uses help one without a clear verb-object relationship. Install a mirror clearly expresses the intended action. Also, avoid beginning a new sentence with And also when the idea can be connected more smoothly with Also.