Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar (past tense and subject-verb agreement), make the answer concise and add one specific reason or example. Use a clear topic sentence then one supporting detail. Keep to 1–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I started using the internet when I was about 15 years old because my school began assigning online research and homework. For example, I used it to find articles and videos to help me understand science topics I found difficult.

Sugestão: Correct sentence structure and quantifiers, and be specific about activities. Start with a clear frequency phrase, then give 1–2 supporting details using linking words (because/for example).

Exemplo: I usually go online for about ten hours a day because I use the internet for work, studying, and communicating with friends. For example, I check emails in the morning, attend online meetings in the afternoon, and study English in the evening.

Sugestão: Use past tense and clear phrasing when describing restrictions. Give one specific example of why you were not allowed and what you did instead. Use linking words like ‘so’ or ‘because’ correctly.

Exemplo: Yes. At my previous job I wasn’t allowed to use the internet between 8:00 and 11:00 PM because that was designated as quiet, family time at home. As a result, I would read books or practice spoken English with my family instead.

Sugestão: Make the response direct and grammatical: use ‘I don’t think so’. Provide a short reason with specific time estimates and activities. Keep sentences concise and coherent with linking words.

Exemplo: I don’t think I spend too much time online because most of my day is taken by work and family responsibilities. I usually have about four hours of personal time in the evening, which I divide between caring for my pet, talking with family, and browsing the internet.

Sugestão: Avoid double negatives and improve clarity. State a direct feeling or action, then give one or two specific alternatives you would do without internet. Use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary (e.g., ‘listen to podcasts’).

Exemplo: I would feel bored at first because I rely on online videos and podcasts to improve my English. However, I would also read books, practice speaking with a language partner, and go for walks to stay productive without the internet.

× I start using the Internet when I was about 15 years old because I need to use Internet to finish my homework and searching the things that I don't understand.

✓ I started using the internet when I was about 15 years old because I needed to use the internet to finish my homework and to search for things that I didn't understand.

Tense inconsistency and verb form errors: the sentence mixes present simple ('start', 'need', 'searching') with past time reference ('when I was about 15 years old'), so past tense should be used throughout. Use past simple 'started' and 'needed'. Also use the infinitive 'to search' or the gerund appropriately with 'to' removed: 'to search for'. Use 'internet' lowercase and include 'for' after 'search'. Correcting maintains past-time context and parallel verb forms. Suggestion: keep verbs in past tense when referring to past events and use 'to' + base verb for purposes ('to search for').

× Usually will about 10s hours per day because I need to use Internet to do anything that I need.

✓ I usually spend about 10 hours per day online because I need the internet to do the things I need.

Quantifier and modal/auxiliary misuse: '10s hours' is incorrect — use '10 hours' or 'about ten hours'. The auxiliary 'will' is unnecessary for habitual actions; use present simple 'I usually spend'. Also add article 'the' before 'internet' and rephrase 'to do anything that I need' to 'to do the things I need' for clarity and correct count/noun usage. Suggestion: use 'usually' + present simple for habitual actions and write numbers as '10 hours' with appropriate articles.

× Usually will be the 8:00 until 11:00 in the night because that was my personal time after my work and after my dinner.

✓ Usually it was from 8:00 until 11:00 at night because that was my personal time after work and after dinner.

Preposition and auxiliary errors: use 'from' ... 'until' to show a time range and 'at night' instead of 'in the night'. The auxiliary 'will' is incorrect for past habitual actions; use past simple 'it was'. Also omit 'my' before 'work' and 'dinner' when speaking generally. This corrects time expression and tense. Suggestion: use 'from' + start time and 'until' + end time, and 'at night' for time of day.

× So I usually will use the Internet to improve my English skills.

✓ So I usually use the internet to improve my English skills.

Auxiliary/modal misuse: 'will' with 'usually' is unnecessary and ungrammatical for habitual present actions. Use present simple 'I usually use'. Also lowercase 'internet'. Suggestion: for habits say 'I usually' + base verb.

× No, I'm not think so because you usually my daytime I will I need to work and maybe after my work I need to spend my time with my pet and family.

✓ No, I don't think so because during the day I need to work and after work I need to spend time with my pet and family.

Pronoun and verb errors: 'I'm not think so' is ungrammatical — use 'I don't think so'. 'You usually my daytime' is incorrect pronoun and word order; intended meaning is 'during the day'. Remove repeated 'I will I need to'. Streamline to 'during the day I need to work'. This fixes subject-verb and pronoun misuse and clarifies time expression. Suggestion: use correct negation 'I don't think so' and time phrase 'during the day'.

× So I just only have about four hours of a personal time to use Internet.

✓ So I only have about four hours of personal time to use the internet.

Article and word order errors: 'a personal time' is incorrect — use 'personal time' without 'a'. 'Just only' is redundant; use 'only'. Use 'the internet' or 'the internet' commonly 'the internet' but 'use the internet' here. This corrects article use and redundancy. Suggestion: avoid redundant adverbs and use uncountable noun 'personal time' without an article.

× I will feel boring and can't do nothing because when I need to improve my English skills I need to watch video and listening to the postcard that one also need to use Internet.

✓ I would feel bored and couldn't do anything because when I need to improve my English skills I need to watch videos and listen to podcasts, which also require the internet.

Multiple errors: 'will feel boring' is wrong; 'bored' is the correct adjective to describe a person. 'Can't do nothing' is a double negative; use 'couldn't do anything'. Conditional is better as 'would' for hypothetical. Use plural 'videos' and 'listen' (base verb) after 'need to'. 'Postcard' is incorrect — likely 'podcasts'. Also 'require the internet' is clearer than 'need to use Internet'. Suggestion: use 'would' for hypothetical scenarios, adjective 'bored', avoid double negatives, match verb forms after 'need to', and use correct vocabulary ('podcasts').

× So if without Internet I can't do nothing and I will feel boring.

✓ So without the internet I couldn't do anything and I would feel bored.

Sentence structure and negation: 'if without Internet' is ungrammatical; use 'without the internet'. Use conditional 'would' and avoid double negatives: 'couldn't do anything'. Use 'bored' for feeling. This makes the conditional sentence grammatical and clear. Suggestion: form conditional sentences as 'If X, I would ...' or 'Without X, I would ...', avoid double negatives and use correct adjective forms.