Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Более чётко сформулируйте начало ответа и избегайте двусмысленностей (например, «maybe 5 or 4 years ago» звучит неуверенно). Дайте одну ясную тему‑фразу, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных примера использования интернета, связывая их логическими словами (e.g., «for example», «such as»). Также сократите количество предложений до максимум 3–4, чтобы ответ звучал естественно.

Exemplo: I started using the internet about five years ago. Since then it has become essential for me: for example, I use it to keep in touch with family and to access online courses for my studies.

Sugestão: Уберите вокабулярные паузы («uh») и исправьте неточные слова («my film» неуместно). Постройте ответ с одной чёткой темой и затем дайте конкретные примеры, используя связки (e.g., «for study, I use…; for leisure, I…»). Также избегайте повторов и излишней длины.

Exemplo: I go online for about three to four hours a day. For study I consult online dictionaries and academic articles, and in my free time I watch educational videos, although I try to limit entertainment to avoid getting distracted.

Sugestão: Исправьте грамматические ошибки и говорите более уверенно: используйте полные предложения («My parents are not strict»). Дайте короткую тему и добавьте одно конкретное объяснение, почему родители разрешают (например, «they trust my responsible use»). Это сделает ответ логичным и связным.

Exemplo: No, I have never been forbidden to use the internet. My parents are quite relaxed because they know I mainly use it for studying and learning, so they trust me to use it responsibly.

Sugestão: Упростите и структурируйте ответ: начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте причину и пример. Избегайте двусмысленных оборотов («I don't think that what I spend a lot of time online»). Уточните формулировки (например, «social media» в единственном выражении) и используйте связки («however», «because»).

Exemplo: I don't think I spend too much time online because I limit my phone use. However, I sometimes lose track of time when scrolling social media, so I try to set time limits to stay focused.

Sugestão: Исправьте лексические ошибки («cover to go» неверно) и используйте более естественные фразы. Дайте чёткое начало («If I had no internet, I would…») и добавьте 1–2 конкретных примера активности с логическим связующим («for example»). Это сделает ответ более естественным и связным.

Exemplo: If I didn't have the internet, I would spend more time with friends. For example, we would go for walks, meet in the park or practise dancing together.

× I started using the Internet not long ago, maybe 5 or 4 years ago.

✓ I started using the Internet about four or five years ago.

The original is understandable but awkward: '5 or 4 years ago' has unnatural number order and uses digits; 'not long ago' conflicts slightly with a multi-year period. Use 'about four or five years ago' for natural spoken English and consistent word form. Use the article 'the Internet' consistently.

× Uh, I spend time online 3 or 4 hours a day.

✓ I spend about three or four hours online a day.

Numbers in formal sentences are usually written as words; the phrasing 'spend time online 3 or 4 hours a day' needs 'about' and smoother word order: 'spend about three or four hours online a day.' This clarifies frequency and reads naturally.

× I use it for my studies, uh, using different dictionaries, articles and watching educational programs.

✓ I use it for my studies: I consult different dictionaries and articles and watch educational programs.

Maintain parallel verb forms: 'consult' and 'watch' (base forms) rather than mixing 'using' and 'watching.' Also 'consult' is a better verb for dictionaries and articles. Use punctuation to separate clauses for clarity.

× But I try not to overuse my film because it can be addictive.

✓ But I try not to overuse my phone because it can be addictive.

'Film' is incorrect here; likely intended 'phone.' Use correct noun 'phone.' Also keep article usage simple: 'overuse my phone.' This fixes meaning and word choice.

× No, my parents not strict at all.

✓ No, my parents are not strict at all.

Missing auxiliary verb 'are' for the present continuous/state: the correct form is 'my parents are not strict.' This is a subject-verb (be) omission error.

× They always encourage me because I use Internet for many purposes, but first of all I use it for my studies.

✓ They always encourage me because I use the Internet for many purposes, but first of all I use it for my studies.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'Internet' in standard English: 'the Internet.' Also the sentence structure is acceptable otherwise.

× I don't think that what I spend a lot of time online because I try to not overuse my phone because it can be addictive, but at the same time it's easy to lose track of time while scrolling through social medias.

✓ I don't think I spend too much time online because I try not to overuse my phone, which can be addictive, but at the same time it's easy to lose track of time while scrolling through social media.

Remove the unnecessary 'that' and correct verb phrase to 'I don't think I spend too much time.' Use 'too much' rather than 'a lot of' for the opinion. 'Try not to overuse' is correct order. 'Social medias' is incorrect plural; use 'social media.' Use a comma and a non-defining relative clause 'which can be addictive' for clarity.

× Without Internet, I usually spend time with my friends.

✓ Without the Internet, I usually spend time with my friends.

Use the definite article 'the Internet.' The rest is fine for habitual action in present tense.

× We cover to go for a walk or do activities we enjoy.

✓ We tend to go for a walk or do activities we enjoy.

'Cover to go' is incorrect collocation. Use 'tend to' or 'often' to express habitual actions: 'We tend to go for a walk' or 'We often go for a walk.' This fixes lexical choice and sentence structure.

× For example, we often dance together.

✓ For example, we often dance together.

This sentence is correct. It appropriately expresses a habitual action in the present simple and requires no change.