Science— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a full sentence that directly answers the question and briefly explains why. Avoid short fragments and add one supporting detail. Use linking words if you add more than one idea.

Exemplo: Yes, I definitely like science because it helps me understand how things in the world work. For example, I enjoy learning about simple experiments that explain everyday phenomena.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence stating when you started, avoid hesitations and unfinished sentences, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example") to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I started learning science in the 10th grade when my teacher introduced structured lessons. For example, we used three textbooks—biology, chemistry and physics—and these helped me understand basic concepts like human survival and natural processes.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence naming the subject, then give specific reasons using linking words like "because" or "for example." Avoid vague phrases and finish your ideas completely.

Exemplo: I am most interested in biology because it explains how human and plant cells function and how traits are inherited. For example, learning about DNA and genetics helped me understand why organisms resemble their parents.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence about activities you did, then add one or two specific examples with results or what you learned. Use correct verb forms and linking words for clarity.

Exemplo: In school I took part in practical lab lessons where we used various flasks to conduct experiments and prepared chemical solutions. For instance, we mixed reagents to observe reactions, which taught me how to follow procedures and record results accurately.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and then a concise reason with a specific example. Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (plural/singular agreement). Use linking words like "because" or "for example."

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy watching science programs, especially on Discovery Channel, because they explain survival strategies and wildlife behavior. For example, a recent episode showed how animals adapt to harsh environments to survive.

Sugestão: If unsure, state that briefly then give a reasoned opinion with specific examples. Avoid hesitations and grammar mistakes (possessive/plural). Use linking words such as "however" or "for example."

Exemplo: I'm not sure about nationwide trends, but I think many schools in China organize visits to zoos, wildlife sanctuaries and science museums. For example, well-known schools often take students on museum trips so children can learn about science through exhibits.

× Yes, definitely. I love.

✓ Yes, definitely. I love science.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks an object; this is a sentence structure error (missing complement). Add the object 'science' to complete the thought and match the examiner's question.

× When I was in 10th grade, I remembered, uh, our teacher start, uh, uh, giving us lessons on science and, uh, they also added a book of, uh, three books for science, uh, such as biology, chemistry and physics.

✓ When I was in 10th grade, I remember our teacher started giving us lessons on science, and they also gave us three science books, such as biology, chemistry, and physics.

Multiple tense and verb-form errors: 'remembered' should be present tense 'remember' when narrating a past routine or memory in conversational context; 'start' should be past 'started'; 'added a book of three books' is awkward — use 'gave us three science books'. This corrects past-tense consistency and clarity.

× Uh, from learning that concepts, we get to know how we survive, how we.

✓ From learning those concepts, we learned how we survive and how our bodies work.

Problems: incorrect determiner 'that' with plural 'concepts' and incomplete clause 'how we.' Use 'those concepts' and complete the sentence. Also align tense consistently (learned or get to know). Here 'learned' fits past reference; alternatively 'we learned how to survive' or 'we learned how our bodies work.'

× I love all the subjects but my I'm fond of biology quite more because it shows how human and plant cells are formed and it all.

✓ I love all the subjects, but I'm especially fond of biology because it shows how human and plant cells are formed.

Errors: extra 'my' is incorrect pronoun/word; 'quite more' is nonstandard — use 'especially' or 'more than others'; ending 'and it all' is colloquial and incomplete. Remove the extra word, use 'especially', and finish the idea clearly.

× What is more, they tell us about the genetics and DNA formation.

✓ What is more, they teach us about genetics and DNA formation.

'The genetics' is incorrect article usage; 'genetics' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also 'tell us about' is acceptable but 'teach us about' is more appropriate for school context.

× During my school days, our teacher give us practical lessons in science labs where we use various type of flask to perform experiments and we also make different type of solutions which are quite fascinating.

✓ During my school days, our teachers gave us practical lessons in science labs where we used various types of flasks to perform experiments, and we also made different types of solutions, which were quite fascinating.

Multiple agreement and tense issues: 'teacher give' should be past plural/agreement 'teachers gave' or 'the teacher gave'; 'use' -> 'used' for past; 'various type of flask' should be 'various types of flasks' (plural agreement); 'different type of solutions' -> 'different types of solutions'. Ensure past tense consistency.

× Yes, definitely. I love watching science programs uh such as Discovery Channel on which they shows how we have to survive with the help of science and how different type of wildlife is living and getting their survival.

✓ Yes, definitely. I love watching science programs such as those on the Discovery Channel, which show how we can survive with the help of science and how different types of wildlife live and survive.

Errors: 'they shows' incorrect verb form — should be 'which show' (subject-verb agreement and relative clause); 'different type of wildlife' should be 'different types of wildlife' (plural); 'is living and getting their survival' is awkward — use 'live and survive' or 'obtain food and shelter'. Also 'such as Discovery Channel on which' is rephrased for natural word order.

× To be honest, I did not know that much, but I think, uh, there are quite zoos and wildlife sanctuaries as well as museums, and the teachers of well renowned schools always take their children's for picnic in various museums so that children can get to know about major things.

✓ To be honest, I don't know much, but I think there are many zoos, wildlife sanctuaries, and museums, and teachers from well-renowned schools often take their children on trips to various museums so that the children can learn about important things.

Problems: tense inconsistency ('did not know' vs present opinion — use 'don't know'); 'quite zoos' is incorrect — use 'many zoos'; 'teachers of well renowned schools' -> 'teachers from well-renowned schools'; 'their children's' misuse of possessive/apostrophe and plural — should be 'their children'; 'for picnic in various museums' -> 'on trips to various museums' or 'for picnics and museum visits'; 'get to know about major things' -> 'learn about important things'. Fix sentence structure and word choice.