Science— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your feeling, then give 1–2 specific reasons with minimal hesitation. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid filler sounds.

Exemplo: I don't really like science much because I find it difficult to understand. For example, I prefer sports and literature since they feel more enjoyable and easier to follow.

Sugestão: Provide a clear time reference and one or two specific subjects you studied. Use a past simple verb to describe when you started and linking words (for example, and, such as) to connect details.

Exemplo: I started learning science when I was about ten years old at primary school in India. There I learned topics such as the Earth and constellations, which I found quite interesting.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence naming the subject, then give a specific reason or example. Use correct word forms (e.g., ‘interests me’ not ‘interests me a lot’ with grammar corrected) and a linking phrase (because, since) to explain why.

Exemplo: I am most interested in Earth science and astronomy because they help me understand our planet and the stars. For example, learning about weather patterns and planetary motion explains everyday phenomena.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear subject sentence about what you did, then give one or two specific examples of experiments or projects. Use past tense for completed activities and linking words (for instance, for example) to add detail.

Exemplo: I have done several simple science experiments and small projects. For example, I once built a model to demonstrate how stars twinkle and another time I created a small volcano experiment using baking soda and vinegar.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, then explain briefly why and mention what you prefer instead. Use linking words (so, because) and correct vocabulary (interested, prefer, watch) to make your response natural.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very interested in science TV programs because I find them boring. Instead, I prefer watching American sitcoms or reading books in my free time.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion, then support it with two specific reasons or facts. Use linking words (for example, because, because of, therefore) and correct noun forms (museums) to improve clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I think Chinese people often visit science museums because they want to learn more about scientific topics and many cities in China have well-equipped museums. Therefore, visiting them is easy and educational for families and students.

× Umm, I think, uh, I'm, I'm not fond of uh, researching saying I, uh, I think I am, I don't, I don't understand much about science.

✓ Umm, I think I'm not fond of researching; I don't understand much about science.

The original contains redundant pronouns and disfluent fragments ('saying I, I think I am'). Remove unnecessary repetitions and combine clauses correctly. Use 'I'm not fond of researching' and 'I don't understand much about science' for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× I just like, uh, anything else such as, uh, sports or umm, literature.

✓ I like other things such as sports and literature.

'Anything else' is too broad and awkward here. Use 'other things' and 'such as' followed by plural nouns connected with 'and' for correct quantifier and parallel structure.

× Uh, I think I, uh, I learned it, uh, when I, uh, was uh, ten in a primary school India.

✓ I learned it when I was ten at a primary school in India.

Use simple past 'learned' and the past 'was' correctly; include the preposition 'in' before 'India' and 'at' before 'a primary school' for correct location expression. Remove filler words.

× I am, I learned so much about uh, umm, constellation and uh, umm, Earth.

✓ I learned a lot about constellations and the Earth.

Use 'a lot' instead of 'so much' in this context and pluralize 'constellation' to 'constellations'. Use the definite article 'the' with 'Earth'.

× Umm, I think umm, uh, earth and umm, astronomy is very umm, interests me a lot.

✓ I think Earth and astronomy interest me a lot.

Subject-verb agreement requires plural verb 'interest' when the compound subject 'Earth and astronomy' is used. Remove extraneous words and use correct word order: subject + verb + object.

× Umm, I think, uh, I can uh, understand manything about our planet and uh.

✓ I think I can understand many things about our planet.

'Manything' is incorrect; use 'many things'. No -ing form needed here. Complete the sentence and remove trailing filler.

× Umm, I uh have done several simple science experiments and small project and umm, I remember when I would turn I uh enjoyed a small experiment about umm star and umm.

✓ I have done several simple science experiments and small projects, and I remember enjoying a small experiment about a star.

Use plural 'projects' to match 'several'. Change 'I remember when I would turn I enjoyed' to 'I remember enjoying' for grammatical clarity. Add 'a' before 'star'.

× Uh, I think, no, I, I don't, uh, inserted in, uh, I'm not interested in, uh, science TV program.

✓ No, I'm not interested in science TV programs.

'Inserted in' is incorrect; use 'interested in'. Use plural 'programs' or 'programmes' and simplify to a clear negative sentence without repeated pronouns.

× I usually see it very boring.

✓ I usually find them very boring.

Use 'find' with an object to describe perception and plural 'them' to refer to 'science TV programs'. 'See it very boring' is ungrammatical.

× So I just read and, uh, squash, uh, TV show, American sitcom.

✓ So I just read and watch TV shows, like American sitcoms.

'Squash' is incorrect word choice; use 'watch'. Maintain parallel structure 'read and watch'. Use plural 'TV shows' and provide an example 'like American sitcoms'.

× Umm, I think, uh, Chinese people often visit send museum because uh, they uh, want to learn and understand many things about science.

✓ I think Chinese people often visit science museums because they want to learn and understand many things about science.

'Send museum' is a mistake; use 'science museums'. Remove extra pronouns and ensure subject and verb are clear.

× So, uh, in Chinese, uh, they have many museum in uh, their country, so they can easier to.

✓ In China, they have many museums in their country, so it is easier for them to visit.

Use the correct country name 'China' instead of 'Chinese'. Pluralize 'museum' to 'museums'. Add 'it is' and 'for them to visit' to complete the comparative structure 'easier for them to visit'.