Science— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more precise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague or incorrect phrases like "roam around" and "households course."

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy science because it explains how things work in everyday life. For example, physics helps us understand how cars move, and chemistry helps us prepare medicines. Because of this, science makes daily tasks safer and more efficient.

Sugestão: Give a concise direct answer, correct tense and avoid repetition. Use one sentence for the time and a second brief detail if needed, linked with a word like "when" or "since."

Exemplo: I started learning science when I was nine years old, in the fourth grade. Since then, basic experiments and classroom lessons have helped me understand simple scientific ideas.

Sugestão: Be specific about the subject and give clear reasons. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "advanced math" or "higher mathematics") and link reason with "because" or "so."

Exemplo: I am most interested in higher mathematics because it improves problem-solving skills. For instance, studying algebra and equations has helped me think logically and solve practical problems more efficiently.

Sugestão: Answer directly and provide one or two specific examples with clear language. Avoid vague phrases like "makes an electrical science." Use linking words like "however" or "for example."

Exemplo: I haven't done many scientific projects, but I have tried basic electrical work at home. For example, I fixed a faulty light switch and learned how circuits and wiring work, which increased my interest in practical electricity.

Sugestão: Clarify what you enjoy and avoid confusing words (e.g., "angels" is likely incorrect). Give specific program types and explain what you learn, using linking words like "because" or "for example."

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy watching science documentaries because they explain discoveries and experiments clearly. For example, programs about space exploration teach me basic astronomy and inspire me to learn more about planets and technology.

Sugestão: Be honest but expand your answer with a logical guess or general observation, using linking words like "but" or "however." Avoid repeating phrases and correct grammar.

Exemplo: I'm not sure because I haven't been to China, so I can't say for certain. However, I would expect many people to visit science museums, especially families and students, because museums are popular places for learning and school trips.

× Yes, I like science because it helps people to easily roam around and some households course easily.

✓ Yes, I like science because it helps people travel more easily and makes some household tasks easier.

The original sentence misuses 'roam around' and 'course' and awkwardly places 'easily'. Replace 'roam around' with 'travel' for clarity and 'course' with 'tasks'. Move 'easily' to modify the verbs ('travel more easily', 'easier') so meaning is clear and grammar is correct. Also streamline sentence flow.

× I learned about science, about science, about uh, when I am nine years old, in class 4, I started to learn science.

✓ I learned about science when I was nine years old; I started to learn it in class 4.

The sentence mixes present tense 'am' with past events. Use past tense 'was' for age in the past. Remove repetition and filler for clarity. 'Started to learn' is fine, so combine into one coherent past-tense sentence.

× I find science subject higher math is interesting for me because it helps me, helps sometimes people to better in algebra and equation.

✓ I find the science subject 'higher math' interesting because it helps me and sometimes helps other people improve in algebra and equations.

The phrase order and articles are incorrect: add 'the' before 'science subject' and put 'higher math' in quotes or as a modifier. Use 'helps me and sometimes helps other people' for parallel structure. Use 'improve in algebra and equations' instead of 'to better in algebra and equation'. Pluralize 'equations'.

× I haven't done so much in science, but I have tried to some electrical work in my home whenever I needed to do that because it also makes an electrical science.

✓ I haven't done much in science, but I have tried some electrical work at home when I needed to, because it relates to electrical science.

'So much' can be simplified to 'much'. 'Tried to some electrical work' is ungrammatical; use 'tried some electrical work'. Use 'at home' not 'in my home' for natural phrasing. 'Because it also makes an electrical science' is unclear; replace with 'because it relates to electrical science' to convey intended meaning.

× I really like it about angels, scientific discoveries, which helps me to learn some basics of science, how to do that.

✓ I really like programs about angels and scientific discoveries, which help me learn some basics of science and how things are done.

'I really like it about angels' is awkward; say 'programs about angels'. 'Which helps me' should be 'which help me' because it refers to plural 'programs'. Remove 'to' before 'learn' and rephrase 'how to do that' as 'how things are done' for clarity.

× I really don't know. I haven't been in China so I don't know so much about this. Other Chinese people are often visit Science Museum or not.

✓ I really don't know. I haven't been to China, so I don't know much about this. I don't know whether other Chinese people often visit science museums.

Use 'been to China' (not 'in China') for visiting. 'So much about this' is better as 'much about this'. 'Other Chinese people are often visit' is ungrammatical: use 'I don't know whether other Chinese people often visit' and pluralize 'science museums' for generality. Also use lowercase for 'science museums' unless it's a proper name.