Sharing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify verb tense and simplify the response. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason using a linking word. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases.

Exemplo: Yes. My parents taught me to share food and toys when I was a child. Because sharing helped me make friends, I learned to be more outgoing and to enjoy playing with others.

Sugestão: Structure the answer: state one or two items, use linking words to explain why, and be specific. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'snacks' not 'snaps') and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I usually share snacks with friends because eating together helps us bond. I also share books with classmates when I know they are interested in the same subjects.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and then two specific examples with reasons. Use correct vocabulary and avoid vague or unfinished sentences.

Exemplo: Personal items such as underwear, shoes, and clothes are not suitable for sharing because of hygiene and fit. Also, expensive or delicate items like electronics should not be shared because they could be damaged.

Sugestão: Make the timeline clear and avoid repeated phrases. Start with a topic sentence, then give a brief reason and a result. Use correct tense and smoother linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Exemplo: Recently I recommended a new movie to a close friend because she was eager to see it. I had watched it and enjoyed it, so I thought she would like it too.

Sugestão: Use a clear topic sentence and correct pronouns (he/him). Give one or two specific reasons why. Keep sentences concise and avoid hesitations.

Exemplo: The first person I would tell is my husband because we live together and he always supports my decisions. He is the person I trust most with important news.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence stating the kinds of news, then add one specific example using linking words like 'for example' and 'because'. Avoid repeating phrases.

Exemplo: I usually share happy news with my friends, such as job promotions or personal milestones, because we like to celebrate together. For example, I would tell them when I had a baby so they could congratulate me.

× Yes, when I was a child, my parents always teach me to share my food or toys with other children.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents always taught me to share my food or toys with other children.

The context is past habitual action ('when I was a child'), so the past tense 'taught' is required instead of present 'teach'. Use past simple for completed or habitual actions in the past. Suggestion: Use past simple verbs for actions that occurred regularly in the past (e.g., 'always taught').

× My parents always said sharing with others with eye and sharing with other children I can find it I could find it easy to make new friends and Both children and I can enjoy

✓ My parents always said that sharing with others makes it easier to make new friends and that both the other children and I can enjoy playing together.

The original sentence has run-on fragments, unclear phrases ('with eye'), and inconsistent tense/modal forms. Combine ideas with a reporting clause ('said that') and use a clear main verb ('makes it easier') and parallel structure ('both the other children and I'). Suggestion: Break long fragments into a single coherent clause and maintain parallelism and appropriate verbs.

× There are several types of small things I like to share with others for example.

✓ There are several kinds of small things I like to share with others, for example:

'Types' is acceptable but 'kinds' or 'types of' followed by the noun is clearer; the sentence also needs punctuation to lead into examples. The original also ends abruptly. Suggestion: Use 'kinds of' or 'types of' and add a colon or continue the sentence to introduce examples.

× I usually share snaps with friends because I think eating together can make us close and sometimes sometimes I share books with my some classmates because I think they also include they are also interested in learning these books.

✓ I usually share snacks with friends because eating together helps us become closer, and sometimes I share books with some classmates because I think they are also interested in studying them.

Multiple issues: 'snaps' is likely a typo for 'snacks'; repetition 'sometimes sometimes'; 'my some classmates' is incorrect word order; 'include they are also' is garbled. Correct by choosing accurate words, fixing word order, removing repetition, and using appropriate verbs ('become closer', 'studying them'). Suggestion: Proofread for typos and repeated words; keep noun phrases in correct order (e.g., 'some classmates').

× So many things are not suitable for sharing.

✓ Many things are not suitable for sharing.

'So many' is colloquial and can be acceptable, but 'many things' is more neutral and appropriate in formal responses. The sentence itself is grammatical but can be improved stylistically. Suggestion: Use 'many things' in formal or exam contexts.

× For example some personal stuff like clothes, shoes are not suitable for sharing because there are size there.

✓ For example, personal items like clothes and shoes are not suitable for sharing because they have different sizes.

Incorrect phrase 'there are size there' and missing commas. Use 'they have different sizes' to express reason. Also use 'items' instead of 'stuff' for formality. Suggestion: Use clear subject pronouns ('they') and correct noun phrases ('different sizes').

× Because if you want to share these things with others, you have to consider there increases their size.

✓ If you want to share these things with others, you have to consider that they may not fit because of size differences.

The sentence begins with 'Because if' (redundant subordinating conjunction) and 'there increases their size' is ungrammatical. Replace with a single conditional clause and a clear reason ('may not fit because of size differences'). Suggestion: Avoid starting subordinate clauses with unnecessary conjunctions; use clear reason phrases.

× There are also some other types which are not suitable for sharing, for example, some expensive

✓ There are also other types of items not suitable for sharing; for example, some expensive personal possessions like jewelry or electronics.

The original sentence is incomplete ('some expensive' what?). Complete the thought by specifying examples and cleaning redundancy ('some other types' -> 'other types of items'). Suggestion: Ensure sentences are complete and provide concrete examples when saying 'for example'.

× Yes, I shared a new movie with one of my close friends.

✓ Yes, I shared a new movie with one of my close friends.

This sentence is already correct: past action 'shared' aligns with the question about recent sharing. No change needed. Suggestion: Keep past simple for completed recent actions.

× She said the movie is launched in recent in recent days and I know she was eager to the movie too.

✓ She said the movie was released recently, and I knew she was eager to see it too.

'Is launched in recent in recent days' is incorrect; use 'was released recently' for past event. 'Eager to the movie' needs infinitive 'to see it'. Maintain consistent past tense after 'she said'. Suggestion: Use 'released' for movies and 'eager to see' for the verb phrase; keep tense consistent after reporting verbs.

× So after I watched the movie and I also thought this was excellent movie.

✓ After I watched the movie, I thought it was an excellent film.

Redundant 'and I also' and missing article before 'excellent movie'. Use 'it was an excellent film' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: Remove unnecessary conjunctions and include articles ('an excellent film').

× I shared it with her and I thought she would love it.

✓ I shared it with her because I thought she would love it.

Original sentence is understandable but could be improved by connecting reason ('because I thought'). This keeps logical flow between the two clauses. Suggestion: Use causal connectors to show intent.

× The first person I would like to share good news with my husband.

✓ The first person I would like to share good news with is my husband.

Missing verb 'is' after the clause; sentence lacks predicate. Add 'is' to link subject and complement. Suggestion: Use 'The first person ... is ...' to form correct cleft-like sentence.

× We live together and always talk about arrangements about the future.

✓ We live together and always talk about arrangements for the future.

Use preposition 'for' with 'arrangements' ('arrangements for the future') rather than repeating 'about'. Suggestion: Use 'arrangements for the future' or 'plans for the future'.

× No matter I have any ideas he always supports me.

✓ No matter what ideas I have, he always supports me.

Incorrect word order and missing 'what'. The correct structure is 'No matter what + clause'. Suggestion: Use the fixed expression 'No matter what ...' followed by the clause.

× So I think if I got good news I, should tell I should tell her.

✓ So I think if I get good news, I should tell him.

Multiple errors: tense should be present conditional ('if I get'), misplaced commas and duplicated phrase, and wrong gender pronoun ('her' should be 'him' for husband). Suggestion: Use 'if I get' for real future conditions and match pronouns to referent.

× I would like to share good news with my friends because I think if I tell them because I think I tell them good news we can celebrate together and they always say always congratulations to say congratulations to me.

✓ I like to share good news with my friends because when I tell them, we can celebrate together and they always say 'congratulations' to me.

The original has repeated phrases ('because I think'), redundancy, and awkward phrasing. Simplify to a clear cause-effect: sharing leads to celebration, and friends congratulate you. Note: use single quotes when transcribing spoken words in JSON. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and use simple clauses: 'when I tell them, we can celebrate together.'

× For example, if I give birth a baby, I would tell them and they would also say congratulations good job.

✓ For example, if I have a baby, I would tell them and they would say 'congratulations' and 'good job'.

Incorrect verb phrase 'give birth a baby' — use 'have a baby' or 'give birth to a baby'. Also missing connectors between phrases 'say congratulations good job'. Suggestion: Use 'have a baby' or 'give birth to a baby' and separate quoted reactions with 'and' or commas.