Sharing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn, tránh câu rời rạc và lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi kèm chi tiết hỗ trợ (ví dụ: những gì đã được dạy, ví dụ cụ thể). Tránh lặp từ ("food and food") và sửa thì động từ (past tense).

Exemplo: Yes, they did. When I was a child, my parents taught me to share my food and toys with my siblings, especially during family meals.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc; sửa lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp ("feel" không đúng, "help" cần 'helps'). Nên nói trực tiếp loại vật/ý tưởng chia sẻ và lý do cụ thể với liên kết (linking words).

Exemplo: I usually like to share food and ideas. For example, I share meals with my family and discuss study tips with friends because explaining things helps me understand them better.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi từ vựng ("balls" không hợp, "affect with me" sai). Nên nêu chủ đề chính (personal items, money), giải thích lý do cụ thể và đưa ví dụ. Dùng linking word để mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I think personal items and money are not suitable to share. For instance, I wouldn't lend my phone or bank card because it could cause privacy issues or financial problems.

Sugestão: Cần dùng thì đúng (past simple) và sắp xếp câu mạch lạc. Nêu rõ bạn chia sẻ điều gì, với ai, khi nào và kết quả/ lý do ngắn gọn. Tránh từ mơ hồ như "a few" mà không nói rõ là gì.

Exemplo: Last weekend I shared some recent news and study tips with my parents during dinner, and we had a long conversation about my future plans.

Sugestão: Cần tránh tiếng ngập ngừng ("uh") và sửa ngữ pháp ("fathers" -> 'my father', 'help' -> 'helps'). Nên cho lý do cụ thể và ngắn gọn vì sao chia sẻ người đó trước tiên.

Exemplo: Of course I would tell my father first because he supports me and always gives helpful advice when I have good news.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời hơi lặp lại và mơ hồ ("knowledge", "dreams" không rõ). Nên nêu loại tin tức cụ thể (e.g., career plans, personal achievements) và giải thích lý do ngắn gọn. Dùng linking words để kết nối ý.

Exemplo: I usually share personal news with my friends, such as exam results or career plans, and sometimes I talk about my dreams and future goals to get their feedback.

× Yes I did. When I was a kid. My parents teach me how to share food and food with other.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a kid, my parents taught me how to share food with others.

The main verbs describe past events, so they must be in the past tense (taught, not teach). 'When I was a kid' should be connected to the following clause with a comma, not a sentence fragment. Use 'others' (plural) instead of 'other'. Also avoid repeating 'food'. Suggested improvement: combine clauses and ensure verbs match past time frame.

× I am willing to share food and feel with my parents. Moreover, I often share knowledge with my friends because it help me understand which other.

✓ I am willing to share food and feelings with my parents. Moreover, I often share knowledge with my friends because it helps me understand each other.

Use the plural noun 'feelings' rather than 'feel'. The verb 'helps' requires third person singular agreement with 'it'. The phrase 'which other' is incorrect; use 'each other' to indicate mutual understanding. Improve by checking noun forms and pronoun phrases.

× I think not certain balls are personal matter and finance because it can affect with me.

✓ I think certain things are personal matters and finances because they can affect me.

'Not certain balls' is unclear; 'certain things' fits the context. Use plural 'matters' and 'finances'. Pronoun and verb must agree: 'they can affect me' (not 'it can affect with me'). Remove unnecessary preposition 'with'. Ensure clarity by choosing appropriate nouns.

× Last weekend I have shared a few and knowledge with my parents in the dinner.

✓ Last weekend I shared a few stories and knowledge with my parents at dinner.

Use simple past 'shared' for a completed action in the past ('Last weekend'). Avoid present perfect with a specific past time. 'A few' needs a noun such as 'stories'. Use 'at dinner' rather than 'in the dinner'.

× Of course, uh the first person I would like to share is uh, fathers because it help me understand better.

✓ Of course, the first person I would like to share with is my father because he helps me understand better.

Use 'share with' to show the recipient. 'Fathers' should be 'my father' singular. Verb agreement: 'he helps' (third person singular). Remove filler 'uh' in formal speech. Ensure pronouns and verb forms match the subject.

× I often share knowledge with my friends. Moreover, I usually share dreams with my friends.

✓ I often share knowledge with my friends. Moreover, I usually share my dreams with them.

Repetition 'with my friends' can be varied; using 'them' avoids redundancy. Add possessive 'my' before 'dreams' to clarify whose dreams. Ensure adverbs 'often' and 'usually' are placed correctly before main verbs.