Sharing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答需要更自然且语法正确，注意时态和句子分割。开头直接回答考官问题，然后用一两句补充细节并使用连接词。例如说明父母如何教，以及你从中学到的具体行为或感受。避免不完整句子和重复词语。

Exemplo: Yes. My parents taught me to share when I was a child. They often encouraged me to give toys to classmates during playtime and explained that sharing helps build friendships. As a result, I still try to share food and help others at school.

Sugestão: 答案内容相关但表达混乱，句子冗长且有语法错误。应先给主题句，然后用连接词列举具体例子并说明原因。避免无意义的短语（如“standard 1”）并把经历说清楚。

Exemplo: I usually share small things like drinks and snacks with friends because we all enjoy trying new foods. For instance, I recommended a noodle restaurant I visited last week because the broth was rich and the portions were generous.

Sugestão: 思路明确但语言表达需更自然和准确。注意词汇搭配（例如说“feelings of sadness”或“personal problems”），并用一两句解释原因和举例。避免“infect”用于情绪传播（可用“affect”或“burden”）。

Exemplo: I don't think personal problems or deep sadness are suitable to share with everyone. Sharing such feelings can sometimes burden others, so I prefer to talk about these issues only with close family or a trusted friend.

Sugestão: 内容可以更有条理，注意语法和词序。先回答，然后用一两句说明具体分享内容和方式（例如分享照片、地址、评价）。避免不准确的短语（如“eat it a variety of goods”）。

Exemplo: Yes. I recently travelled to Japan and shared several recommendations with friends. I sent photos of the cafés I visited and shared their locations on Google Maps, mentioning which dishes I liked most.

Sugestão: 回答思路清晰，但用词和句子需要更自然。把原因说得更明确，例如“we have similar tastes”并补充具体示例。保持一句主题句加一两句细节。

Exemplo: I would share good news with my mother because we have similar tastes and she understands my preferences. For example, if I find a lovely café that serves great lattes, I would tell her so we could visit together.

Sugestão: 表达需更自然并修正语法错误。先概述你分享的新闻类型，然后给出原因和具体例子，使用合适的连词和形容词（例如“atmosphere” not “graceful” awkwardly). 注意单复数和时态一致。

Exemplo: I usually share news about good restaurants with my friends because we all enjoy tasty food and taking photos. For example, I told them about a café with a cozy atmosphere and excellent desserts that are very photogenic.

× Yes, my parents teach me to share more in my daily lives they told me that sharing is an essential thing to cooperate with others it can deliver your happiness and your.

✓ Yes, my parents taught me to share more in my daily life. They told me that sharing is essential for cooperating with others and that it can bring you happiness.

原句将过去发生的教育事件用现在时（teach）描述，时态不一致且句子过长缺少标点。应使用过去式“taught”表示过去发生的动作；“daily lives”不自然，改为“daily life”。此外将句子拆分并补全连接词使意义更清晰。建议在叙述过去经历时统一使用过去时，并注意标点分句。

× I like to share some small things like drinks and snacks because my friends and I are both like eating delicious food and also share.

✓ I like to share small things like drinks and snacks because my friends and I both like eating delicious food and sharing.

原句中“are both like eating”时态和结构错误。应用一般现在时表习惯性动作，结构为“both like ... and ...”。将“also share”改为动名词“sharing”以保持并列结构一致。建议整理并列结构，保持动词形式一致。

× I also recommend restaurants I visited recently.

✓ I also recommend restaurants I visited recently.

该句语法本身没有错误，但需注意语序和语境一致性。动词“recommend”可用于现在时事实陈述，而“visited recently”用过去分词短语作定语是可以接受的。此处无需改动，但提醒：若想强调体验可改为“I also recommend restaurants that I visited recently.”以增加清晰度。

× For example, I tried the Noodle place last week and I told my friends about the standard 1.

✓ For example, I tried a noodle place last week and I told my friends about it.

原句“the Noodle place”和“the standard 1”表达不自然且含糊。用不定冠词“a noodle place”更合适；“the standard 1”可能为笔误，应改为“it”指代该餐馆。句中时态过去式“tried”和“told”正确，主要是词汇选择和代词指代问题。建议使用清晰的指代词并避免不必要的大写。

× I think the sadness things are not suitable for sharing because they contain too many bad mood.

✓ I think sad things are not suitable for sharing because they involve too much bad mood.

原句中名词修饰词使用错误：“the sadness things”应为形容词“sad things”。“contain too many bad mood”中“many”与不可数名词“mood”搭配不当，改为“too much bad mood”或更自然的“negative emotions”。建议用形容词修饰名词并注意可数/不可数搭配。

× I don't want to deliver the bad mood to infect others to make them under pressure.

✓ I don't want to pass on my bad mood and make others feel pressured.

原句“deliver the bad mood to infect others to make them under pressure”中动词选择和介词搭配不当。“deliver”通常不用于情绪传播，改为“pass on”；“infect”用于疾病或比喻时也可，但在此更自然用“make others feel pressured”。同时“under pressure”前不需要“make them under pressure”，应说“make others feel pressured”。建议选择更自然的短语表达情绪传播与造成压力的意思。

× For example, the illness, I think it is not suitable for share.

✓ For example, illness—I don't think it is suitable to share.

原句“not suitable for share”中“share”应使用不定式“to share”或动名词“sharing”。另外句子断句和标点需要改进，使用破折号或重组句子更清楚。建议注意不定式与动名词的正确使用及标点分隔。

× Yes I do. I went to Japan for travelling recently and I eat it a variety of goods, things like the noodle and the coffee and I share the address on Google Maps to recommend.

✓ Yes, I do. I went to Japan recently and bought a variety of goods, like noodles and coffee, and I shared the addresses on Google Maps to recommend them.

句中时态混用：“went”是过去式，随后出现现在时“eat”不合适，且“for travelling”表达不自然，应为“went to Japan recently”或“went to Japan for travel”。“I eat it a variety of goods”语法乱序且动词不当，应为“bought a variety of goods”。推荐地点的动作发生在过去，故用过去式“shared”。建议在叙述过去经历时保持过去时一致，注意动词及词序。

× I want to share with my mom because she takes a similar flavor to me so I understand what she likes.

✓ I want to share with my mom because she has a similar taste to me, so I understand what she likes.

原句“takes a similar flavor to me”中代词和词语搭配错误。“take a flavor”不自然，正确表达为“have a similar taste”。注意代词“she”和“me”在比较结构中保持正确形式。建议学习常用搭配如“have a similar taste/like the same things”。

× For example, she likes drinking latte so I can recommend the good cafe to her.

✓ For example, she likes drinking lattes, so I can recommend good cafés to her.

原句“drinking latte”应复数或不可数视语境，通常说“drinking lattes”或“drinking latte”均可，但更自然为“lattes”。“the good cafe”不需要定冠词“the”，且“cafe”复数更合适。建议注意名词单复数及冠词使用。

× I will share the good restaurants to my friends because both of them are like eating delicious cuisines and taking beautiful pictures.

✓ I will share good restaurants with my friends because they both like eating delicious food and taking beautiful pictures.

原句“share the good restaurants to my friends”介词使用错误，应为“share ... with ...”。“both of them are like eating”结构错误，应为“they both like eating”。“delicious cuisines”用法可接受但更常见为“delicious food”。建议调整句子结构，确保动词搭配正确，主语与谓语一致。

× For example, I want to share the good Cafe because they can they had a graceful atmosphere.

✓ For example, I want to share a good café because it has a pleasant atmosphere.

原句结构混乱，“they can they had a graceful atmosphere”无意义。应明确主语“café”并使用正确时态和形容词，改为“it has a pleasant atmosphere”。“graceful”用于描述地点不太自然，换为“pleasant”或“nice”更合适。建议重写句子以明确主谓并使用恰当形容词。