Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly and use consistent past tense. Correct the sentence structure around “my father bought me,” and replace “go around the blocks nearby my house” with a more natural phrase such as “ride around the blocks near my house.” Add a specific detail about where or when you rode, and finish with a clear description of how you felt.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it with my friends around the blocks near our house. We usually went riding after school, and I really enjoyed it.

Sugestão: Answer the question clearly at the beginning by saying whether bikes are popular. Avoid the unclear comparison with “some other things,” repeated words, and hesitation fillers. Use “bikes” for the plural subject and “ride” rather than “drive.” Support your opinion with a specific reason or example, such as their affordability or use for short trips.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They are affordable and easy to ride, so many people use them to get around their neighbourhoods. They are also a convenient way for children to play outdoors.

× Actually when I was a child, I my father bought me a bike that I used to play with my friends and sometimes I go around the blocks nearby my house and we really enjoyed.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, my father bought me a bike. I used to ride it with my friends, and sometimes I rode around the blocks near my house. We really enjoyed it.

The phrase I my father bought me a bike has two subjects, I and my father, without a grammatical connection. Use my father as the subject of bought. The original also joins several complete ideas in a confusing way. Break them into shorter sentences or connect them with suitable conjunctions.

× Actually when I was a child, I my father bought me a bike that I used to play with my friends and sometimes I go around the blocks nearby my house and we really enjoyed.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, my father bought me a bike. I used to ride it with my friends, and sometimes I rode around the blocks near my house. We really enjoyed it.

The answer describes activities that happened during childhood, so go should be in the past tense: rode. Keep the verbs in the past when describing this completed period. Used to is also appropriate for a repeated past activity.

× Actually when I was a child, I my father bought me a bike that I used to play with my friends and sometimes I go around the blocks nearby my house and we really enjoyed.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, my father bought me a bike. I used to ride it with my friends, and sometimes I rode around the blocks near my house. We really enjoyed it.

Nearby does not normally take a noun phrase directly after it in this construction. Use near my house, or say close to my house. For example: I rode around the blocks near my house.

× Well actually speaking of popular there are some other things which is popular also in my country. Um but uh bike is quite quite uh useful for us because it's easy to ride and we can drive it everywhere and also safe for kids uh to drive it

✓ Well, speaking of what is popular, there are some other things that are popular in my country too. Bikes are quite useful for us because they are easy to ride, and we can ride them everywhere. They are also safe for kids to ride.

Things is plural, so the verb in the relative clause must be are, not is. Make sure the verb agrees with its subject: plural subjects take are, while singular subjects take is.

× Well actually speaking of popular there are some other things which is popular also in my country. Um but uh bike is quite quite uh useful for us because it's easy to ride and we can drive it everywhere and also safe for kids uh to drive it

✓ Well, speaking of what is popular, there are some other things that are popular in my country too. Bikes are quite useful for us because they are easy to ride, and we can ride them everywhere. They are also safe for kids to ride.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article, as in a bike. When talking about bikes in general, use the plural form without an article: Bikes are quite useful.

× Well actually speaking of popular there are some other things which is popular also in my country. Um but uh bike is quite quite uh useful for us because it's easy to ride and we can drive it everywhere and also safe for kids uh to drive it

✓ Well, speaking of what is popular, there are some other things that are popular in my country too. Bikes are quite useful for us because they are easy to ride, and we can ride them everywhere. They are also safe for kids to ride.

The phrase and also safe for kids to drive it does not form a complete clause as written. Add a subject and verb, such as They are also safe for kids to ride. Also, use ride with bikes rather than drive.