Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly and add a few specific details, but avoid repeating “even.” Correct the grammar: say “didn’t use to ride much” rather than “didn’t used to write much,” and “hung out” rather than “hanged out.” Use “with it” instead of repeating “with that bike,” and make the list of activities easier to follow.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It originally belonged to my father, but he didn’t ride it much, so I started using it. I rode it to school and my coaching classes, and I also used it to meet my friends. We sometimes went cycling together in the morning.

Sugestão: Give a clear overall answer, then explain who uses bikes and why. Clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorcycles, since “bike” can refer to either, and correct “ride bike” to “ride bikes.” Avoid the unclear phrase “people below a poverty line” and complete your final idea; the answer currently ends mid-sentence. You could also use a linking phrase such as “In addition.”

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are popular in my country, although the type people use varies by area. In cities such as Mumbai and Goa, tourists often rent bicycles or motorbikes to explore, including along the coast. In other areas, people rely on bikes as an affordable way to get around. They are practical for everyday journeys.

× The bike was originally my father's, which he didn't used to write much, so I started riding it.

✓ The bike was originally my father's, which he didn't use to ride much, so I started riding it.

After did or didn't, use the base form of the verb, so used should be use. Ride fits the context of a bike; write would mean putting words on paper.

× I often went to my coaching classes and even went to school and even hanged out with my friends.

✓ I often went to my coaching classes and even went to school and hung out with my friends.

The past tense of hang, meaning to spend time socially, is hung, not hanged. Hanged is generally used for execution by hanging.

× Yes, we can say bikes are popular in my country, but bikes are mostly popular in cities such as Mumbai, Goa, where the tourists like to ride bike on beaches.

✓ Yes, we can say bikes are popular in my country, but they are mostly popular in places such as Mumbai and Goa, where tourists like to ride bikes on the beaches.

Bike is a countable noun and needs a determiner when singular. Since the sentence refers to bikes in general, use the plural bikes. The correction also uses places because Goa is not a city.

× Bikes are also seen as a necessity in my country where the people below a poverty line use bikes to convey

✓ Bikes are also seen as a necessity in my country, where people below the poverty line use bikes to get around.

The established expression is the poverty line, so the definite article the is needed. The article the is also unnecessary before people when referring to people generally. The original sentence ends with convey, which is incomplete in this context; get around expresses the intended meaning.