Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题，并统一使用过去时：说 “I had a bike”，而不是 “I have a bike”。后面的表达有多处难以理解；如果想表达“求爸爸给我买自行车，并每天骑车上学”，可以说 “I begged my dad to buy me one” 和 “I rode it to school every day”。补充一两个具体细节即可，避免重复开头的 “when I was a child”。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I begged my dad to buy me one, and he eventually did. I rode it to school every day, so it was a big part of my childhood.

Sugestão: 先明确回答自行车现在是否流行，再用清晰的理由或对比展开。注意表达“骑自行车”应使用 “ride a bike”，不能说 “roll back”；描述过去时用 “rode”，描述过去的年代可以说 “in the 2000s” 或 “before 2010”。原答案中的汽车与自行车之间的关系不够清楚，建议说明自行车现在流行的原因，或明确对比现在和过去。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, and they’re also good for the environment. Before 2010, many people rode bikes to school or work, although more people use cars now.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是“小时候”的过去经历，因此 have 应使用过去式 had。回答过去发生的事情时，要注意主句动词与 when 引导的过去时间保持时态一致。

× I load it every day to school.

✓ I loaded it every day to school.

前文说明这是小时候发生的事情，因此 load 应改为过去式 loaded。描述过去反复发生的习惯，也通常使用一般过去时。

× The car is familiar for so many years.

✓ The car has been familiar for so many years.

for so many years 表示某种状态从过去持续到现在，通常使用现在完成时。应将 is 改为 has been。