Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答能表达出你小时候有自行车，但时态和句子结构错误较多。讲过去的经历时要统一使用一般过去时，例如用“had”“bought”和“rode”。“my father bike to me”应改为“my father bought me a bike”；“use the bike to buy some to shopping”表达不自然，可说“rode it to the shops”。删去重复的“often usually”，并用一两个具体细节补充即可。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it to the shops.

Sugestão: 先明确回答自行车现在是否受欢迎，再用清楚、完整的理由或例子展开。你提到了过去，但“the past doesn't popular”语法不正确，也没有清楚说明过去和现在的对比；“if you are not for 16 week 10”意思难以理解，建议删去或重新组织。可使用“Nowadays”“In the past”“because”等表达，让观点和理由之间的关系更清楚。

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and inexpensive. In the past, people may have relied on them even more, but today many also use cars or public transport.

× Yes, I have a bike when we're children. When we're child, um, the bike is um my father bike to me and I often usually use the bike to buy some to shopping.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when we were children. When we were children, my father gave me the bike, and I often used it to go shopping.

问题询问的是童年时期的经历，因此应使用过去时。这里的 have、we're、is 和 use 应分别改为 had、were、was（在改写为“gave me the bike”后不再需要 is）和 used。描述过去发生的事情时，注意将主要动词统一改为过去时。

× When we're child

✓ When we were children

主语是 we，表示不止一个人，因此 child 应使用复数 children。child 的复数形式是不规则变化，不是 childs。

× In my country the past doesn't popular.

✓ In the past, bikes weren't popular in my country.

句子中的 in the past 表示过去，所以应使用过去时。改写后用 weren't popular 描述自行车过去不受欢迎。回答关于过去的情况时，注意使用相应的过去时态。