Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答切题，也提供了上学时骑车的细节，但需要注意过去时：将“have”改为“had”，并用“was good at riding it”表达过去擅长骑车。可以删去重复的“I think”和“to ride it”，让回答更自然、简洁。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was about ten. I used to ride it to school, and I was quite good at riding it.

Sugestão: 回答提到了中国过去和现在的情况，也给出了汽车、公交车和锻炼等理由。不过，问题询问自行车在全国是否流行，建议避免只谈“我们家”的情况，并先直接说明目前是否流行。注意“bikes”是复数，可说“they used to be popular”；删掉过多的填充词，并用“cycling for exercise”等自然表达。

Exemplo: Bikes used to be very popular in China, but they are less common for commuting nowadays. Many people drive or take the bus instead. However, cycling is still popular as a way to exercise, especially in parks and on dedicated bike paths.

× Um, I have a bike when I was 10 years old. I used the bike to go to school, and I think I'm very good at it, to ride it.

✓ Um, I had a bike when I was 10 years old. I used it to go to school, and I think I was very good at riding it.

你在描述10岁时的经历，因此表示“拥有”应使用过去式 had，而不是 have。谈论当时骑车的能力时，使用过去式 was 与上下文保持一致。另外，介词 at 后接动词时通常要用动名词形式，所以应说 good at riding，而不是 good at it, to ride it。

× Yeah, it used to be very popular in China, but right now, um, we have so many cars in our family, so we don't need to bike and also we can take the bus so um the bike right now is more like a tool to do some a practice to do some exercise I think

✓ Yeah, cycling used to be very popular in China, but right now, um, we have so many cars in our family, so we don't need to bike, and we can also take the bus. So, um, cycling is now more like a way to get some exercise, I think.

some 和 a 不能连用来修饰同一个名词，因此不能说 some a practice。这里表达“锻炼”时，exercise 通常作不可数名词，可说 some exercise。可以用 a way to get some exercise 来表达“锻炼的一种方式”。