Bike— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
No, I didn't have a bike when I when I was a child and in fact I don't know how to ride a bike. I remember them when I was young. I asked my mom to help me but no other people to help me to understand to learn how to ride a bike.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, bikes are popular in my country, in fact we have many streets with apart just for the bike. And for example in touring there are many bike that you can take with an abandonment, with a document and you can ride it.
Avaliação
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Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: Answer directly, then add one clear reason or detail. Avoid repeating “when I” and “to help me,” and make “I remember them” more specific. Use the natural expression “learn how to ride a bike.”
Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child, and I still can’t ride one. I remember asking my mother to teach me, but she wasn’t able to help, so I never learned.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 48.0Sugestão: Your direct answer and examples are relevant, but clarify your meaning and use accurate phrases such as “separate bike lanes” and “rent a bike.” Avoid starting a sentence with “And for example”; connect your supporting detail with “For example.”
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many streets have separate bike lanes, which makes cycling safer. For example, in some cities, people can rent a bike by showing an ID and use it to get around.
Gramática
× I asked my mom to help me but no other people to help me to understand to learn how to ride a bike.
✓ I asked my mom to help me, but there were no other people to help me learn how to ride a bike.
The phrase ‘but no other people to help me’ is a sentence fragment because it has no finite verb. Add ‘there were’ to make it a complete clause. After ‘help me,’ use the base verb ‘learn’; ‘to understand to learn’ is unnecessary here.
× And for example in touring there are many bike that you can take with an abandonment, with a document and you can ride it.
✓ And, for example, there are many bikes that you can take with an abandonment, with a document, and you can ride it.
‘Many’ is used with plural countable nouns, so ‘bike’ should be ‘bikes.’ Remember to make countable nouns plural after words such as ‘many.’
× And for example in touring there are many bike that you can take with an abandonment, with a document and you can ride it.
✓ And, for example, there are many bikes that you can take with an abandonment, with a document, and you can ride them.
The pronoun ‘it’ refers to ‘many bikes,’ which is plural, so use the plural pronoun ‘them.’ Match a pronoun to its antecedent in number.
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