Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答开头有明显的理解和表达问题：“If you are asking me why”与问题无关，“whether I have a child”也改变了原意。建议先直接回答“有”或“没有”，再补充一两个具体细节。注意使用“second-hand”而不是“second handed”，并保持时态一致：讲过去的经历用“loved”。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a second-hand bike when I was in high school. It wasn’t fancy, but I really liked it. I didn’t ride it to school every day, though.

Sugestão: 观点明确，也提到了共享单车这一具体例子。可以把第一句补完整，例如“Bikes are extremely popular”，并将“with a small portion of money”换成更自然的“for a small fee”。“and ready to to go”表达不完整且有重复；最后谈当前情况时，注意使用现在时“are”，而不是“was”。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are extremely popular in China, especially shared bikes. People can rent one for a small fee using a mobile app, which is a convenient way to travel short distances. You can see them in many cities.

× If you are asking me why, well, whether I have a child when I was in primary school, my answer is no.

✓ If you mean whether I had a bike when I was in primary school, my answer is no.

这里谈论的是小学时期的情况，应用过去时 had，而不是现在时 have。根据考官的问题，回答中应指 bike。

× If you are asking me why, well, whether I have a child when I was in primary school, my answer is no.

✓ If you mean whether I had a bike when I was in primary school, my answer is no.

原句中“If you are asking me why”和“whether...”结构衔接不当，读起来像两个未连贯的表达。可改用“If you mean whether...”引出要回答的问题，使句子结构完整清楚。

× So yeah, although it was a second handed bicycle, I really love it and I didn't use it to go to school every day.

✓ So yeah, although it was a second-hand bicycle, I really loved it, and I didn't use it to go to school every day.

这句话讲的是高中时期的自行车及当时的经历，因此 love 应使用过去式 loved，与 was 和 didn't use 的过去时保持一致。

× You know, China actually has shared bicycles which people can borrow with a small portion of money and ready to to go anywhere they want.

✓ You know, China actually has shared bicycles which people can borrow for a small amount of money and use to go anywhere they want.

表示“以少量费用借用”时，应使用 for，而不是 with。可记住常见搭配“borrow something for a fee/for a small amount of money”。

× You know, China actually has shared bicycles which people can borrow with a small portion of money and ready to to go anywhere they want.

✓ You know, China actually has shared bicycles which people can borrow for a small amount of money and use to go anywhere they want.

原句中“people can borrow”和“ready to go”结构不平行，而且“ready to”前缺少合适的主语。改为“borrow ... and use ...”后，两个动词共用主语 people，结构完整；同时删除重复的 to。

× So it was really popular and convenient.

✓ So they are really popular and convenient.

前文的 shared bicycles 是复数，应用复数代词 they 指代，不能用单数 it。

× So it was really popular and convenient.

✓ So they are really popular and convenient.

问题询问自行车在中国是否受欢迎，讨论的是当前情况，因此应使用现在时 are，而不是过去时 was。