Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答直接，但第二句有明显语法问题：“gave me one for me to riding”应改为“gave me one so I could ride”，“back to home”应改为“home”或“back home”。避免重复使用“riding”，并补充一个具体细节，例如骑车上学的感受或这辆车的特点。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was ten, my parents gave me a bike so I could ride to school. It was a little old, but I really enjoyed cycling to and from school.

Sugestão: 先直接回答自行车是否受欢迎。当前回答中的“very euro”和“junior students of two”意思不清，而且句子没有说完；请使用简单、准确的表达，并说明哪些人常骑自行车以及原因。回答控制在两到三句，并用“for example”或“because”等连接词补充细节。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among schoolchildren. Many students ride them to school because they are convenient and inexpensive. Some adults also cycle to work or exercise.

× My mom and dad gave me one for me to riding to school and riding back to home.

✓ My mom and dad gave me one for me to ride to school and ride back to home.

“to”后面表示目的时应接动词原形，不能接动词-ing形式。因此“to riding”应改为“to ride”。

× My mom and dad gave me one for me to riding to school and riding back to home.

✓ My mom and dad gave me one for me to ride to school and ride back home.

表示“骑车回家”时，home前通常不加介词“to”，应说“ride back home”。

× Yes, I think that was very euro in the junior students of two riding bikes to school and for the adults they also

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very euro among junior students who ride bikes to school, and among adults as well.

问题询问自行车现在是否受欢迎，因此回答一般情况时应使用现在时。“was”是过去时，应改为“are”。

× Yes, I think that was very euro in the junior students of two riding bikes to school and for the adults they also

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very euro among junior students who ride bikes to school, and among adults as well.

表达某事物在某一群体中受欢迎或常见时，通常用“among”，而不是“in”。

× Yes, I think that was very euro in the junior students of two riding bikes to school and for the adults they also

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very euro among junior students who ride bikes to school, and among adults as well.

原句后半部分“and for the adults they also”没有完整表达意思，缺少与前文平行、完整的结构。可以改为“and among adults as well”，表示成年人也一样。