Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答切题，先直接说明小时候有自行车，再补充用途和感受，结构清晰。可以把“rode to school with my friend”改得更自然，例如“rode to school with a friend”；另外，“I loved cycling because it made me feel free and it was very fun”表达略重复，可以用更简洁、具体的原因替代。注意在附加细节之间使用连接词，让表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle that I often rode to school with a friend. It was perfect for getting around my neighborhood, and I enjoyed the sense of freedom it gave me.

Sugestão: 回答直接表达了观点，也给出了共享单车的例子，但答案在“the environmental”处中断，导致句子不完整，影响清晰度。请补全想表达的意思，例如说明共享单车有利于环境；“rapid urban development”与自行车普及之间的关系也可以解释得更具体。尽量用完整句子，并控制在五句以内。

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people use shared bikes to travel short distances, such as going to work or school. They are convenient, affordable, and better for the environment than driving.

× I think bikes are very popular in my country because of rapid urban development and the widespread bike sharing systems.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country because of rapid urban development and widespread bike-sharing systems.

这里是在泛指广泛使用的共享单车系统，不需要在复数名词短语前使用定冠词“the”。泛指复数名词通常不加冠词。另外，“bike-sharing”作复合形容词修饰“systems”时，通常加连字符。

× For example, many people use shared bikes for short trips to work or school because they are convenient and the environmental

✓ For example, many people use shared bikes for short trips to work or school because they are convenient and environmentally friendly.

句子在“the environmental”处中断，结构不完整；“the”后面需要接名词，但这里没有完成表达。若要表达“对环境友好”，可使用副词“environmentally”修饰形容词“friendly”，组成“environmentally friendly”。