Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly using the past tense: “I had a bike.” Avoid repeating “bike,” and use “blue” rather than “color blue.” The final phrase is unclear; if you mean your father bought it for you, say so. Add one relevant detail, such as how often you rode it.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then explain it with one or two reasons. Replace “most of them” with “most people,” and use “other forms of transportation” and “there are fewer bike lanes.” Your answer is unfinished, so complete the final idea and avoid repeating “bikes.”

Exemplo: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people use cars or motorbikes because they are more convenient, and there aren’t many bike lanes in some areas.

× I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a period in the past, so use the past-tense form had rather than the present-tense form have.

× It is color blue.

✓ It was blue.

Because you are describing the bike when you were a child, use the past-tense verb was. Blue is an adjective that describes the bike; color is unnecessary here.

× It's my father body for me.

✓ My father bought it for me.

The original clause does not have a clear grammatical structure, and body does not fit the intended meaning. If you mean that your father purchased the bike for you, use the past-tense sentence My father bought it for me.

× Most of them use cars or motorbikes for the others transportation.

✓ Most people use cars or motorbikes for their transportation.

The pronoun them is unclear and may appear to refer to bikes. Use people to identify who uses the vehicles. Others is a pronoun, but a determiner is needed before transportation; their is appropriate here.

× Lack of people use bikes because there are less of bikes routes.

✓ Few people use bikes because there are fewer bike routes.

Use few to describe a small number of people. Bike routes are countable, so use fewer rather than less. Do not use of between fewer and bike routes.