Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意使用过去时：小时候的经历应说 “I got/had” 和 “I rode”，而不是 “I have” 和 “I ride”。“bite” 应为 “bike”；“the community I live” 可改为 “the neighborhood where I lived”。避免重复和自我修正（“It was a it is”），并用自然表达说明骑车如何帮助你放松。

Exemplo: Yes, I got my first bike when I was seven, and I was thrilled. I often rode it around my neighborhood after finishing my homework because it was a fun way to relax.

Sugestão: 用现在时直接表达看法，例如 “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular”。避免 “I guessed, I think” 这类犹豫和重复，也不要把句子拆得过于零散。将 “bite” 改为 “bike”，并把 “a convenient transportation” 改为 “a convenient way to get around”。用更准确、不过度概括的细节说明人们会在什么情况下骑车。

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, so people often use them for short trips, such as going to a nearby supermarket.

× Yes, I have my first bite when I was seven years old.

✓ Yes, I had my first bite when I was seven years old.

这句话描述的是“七岁时”发生的过去事件，因此动词 have 应使用过去式 had。

× I always ride my bike around the community I live.

✓ I always rode my bike around the community where I lived.

这句话讲的是童年时期的习惯，应使用过去式 rode。为了让整句与过去时间保持一致，live 也应改为 lived。

× I always ride my bike around the community I live.

✓ I always rode my bike around the community where I lived.

表示“我居住的社区”时，需要用关系副词 where 连接从句；也可以说 the community that I lived in。不能直接说 the community I live。

× It was a it is a great way to relax myself when I finish my homework.

✓ It was a great way to relax myself after I finished my homework.

原句中重复出现了 It was a 和 it is a，造成句子结构混乱。应删除重复部分，并将后面的内容连成完整、清晰的句子。

× It was a it is a great way to relax myself when I finish my homework.

✓ It was a great way to relax myself after I finished my homework.

句子描述的是过去的情况，finish 应改为过去式 finished，以保持时态一致。

× I guessed, I think it was quite popular. In my country.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

这里是在回答自行车现在是否受欢迎，表达的是当前看法，不应使用过去式 guessed。可以直接用 I think 引出观点。

× I guessed, I think it was quite popular. In my country.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

自行车在该国是否受欢迎属于一般情况，应使用一般现在时 are，而不是过去式 was。

× In my country.

✓ Bikes are quite popular in my country.

In my country 只有介词短语，没有谓语动词，不能独立构成完整句子。应将它与前面的观点合并，并补上完整的主谓结构。

× Every family has its own bite, because you know that bite is a convenient transportation to if, for example, go to the supermarket to buy vegetables.

✓ Every family has its own bite because, for example, it is convenient transportation for going to the supermarket to buy vegetables.

transportation 通常是不可数名词，不能说 a transportation。这里应去掉 a。若要使用冠词，可以说 a convenient means of transportation。

× Every family has its own bite, because you know that bite is a convenient transportation to if, for example, go to the supermarket to buy vegetables.

✓ Every family has its own bite because, for example, it is convenient transportation for going to the supermarket to buy vegetables.

原句中的 to if, for example, go 结构不完整，表达不清。可以改为 for example, it is convenient ...，或改为 a convenient way to get to the supermarket，使句子结构完整。