Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly in the past tense, and make the ownership and reason for having a bike clear. Use natural phrases such as “When I was a child” and “my parents bought it for me.” The details about other children in your neighborhood are relevant, but express them in a complete sentence and avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me, and I was excited because most of the children in my neighborhood had bikes too.

Sugestão: Give a clear yes-or-no answer first, then support it with the reasons you mentioned. Use complete sentences and linking words such as “also” or “because.” Correct the phrasing to “bikes are affordable,” “environmentally friendly,” and “easy to carry,” and finish your final idea rather than leaving it incomplete.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They are relatively affordable and environmentally friendly, so many people use them for short trips. They are also convenient in crowded areas because they are easy to park.

× When I was a chill I have a rabbi which I bought for me by my parent absolutely all the way.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike that my parents bought for me.

The answer refers to childhood, a finished period in the past, so have should be changed to had. Use the simple past to describe a possession in that period.

× My kid in my neighbor all have a own own bite so I I got to.

✓ The kids in my neighborhood all have their own bikes, so I got one too.

The sentence refers to several children and several bikes, so use the plural forms kids and bikes. Check whether the noun refers to one person or more than one when choosing its form.

× My kid in my neighbor all have a own own bite so I I got to.

✓ The kids in my neighborhood all have their own bikes, so I got one too.

Their is the possessive pronoun needed to show that the bikes belong to the kids. Match a possessive pronoun to the noun that owns something.

× My kid in my neighbor all have a own own bite so I I got to.

✓ The kids in my neighborhood all have their own bikes, so I got one too.

Do not use a before own in this phrase. Use the possessive determiner their directly before own: their own bikes.

× My country, but it's very popular it's not big oh because of uh it's very cheap more than that it's umm friendly with the environment.

✓ In my country, bikes are very popular because they are very cheap and environmentally friendly.

The original contains an incomplete opening phrase and several clauses joined without clear structure. Begin with a complete phrase, then connect the reasons in a clear sentence.

× It's friendly with the environment.

✓ It's friendly to the environment.

The usual preposition in this expression is to, not with. You can also say environmentally friendly.

× So I think it's a very popular for that and moreover, I think bar is portable so it's very.

✓ So I think bikes are very popular for these reasons. Moreover, bikes are portable.

A cannot be used before the adjective popular unless a singular noun follows it, as in a popular choice. Here, popular describes bikes, so remove a.

× So I think it's a very popular for that and moreover, I think bar is portable so it's very.

✓ So I think bikes are very popular for these reasons. Moreover, bikes are portable.

The original combines ideas without clear sentence boundaries and ends with an incomplete clause. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and make sure each sentence expresses a complete thought.