Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I have. I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode my bike to have a practice with my friends in the park. This is a wonderful time for me. It was a wonderful time for me.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Personally I think bike was popular in my child childhood but now people. Often used by people do not. Doesn't often use bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 52.0Sugestão: 回答切题,也提到了和朋友在公园骑车的经历,但有几处明显的语法和表达问题:谈论过去应说“Yes, I did”,而不是“Yes, I have”;“have a practice”不符合这里的表达习惯,可改为“practise riding”或“ride around”;回忆过去时要用“was”,并避免重复两次“wonderful time”。建议先直接回答,再补充一个具体细节,例如骑车的地点或当时的感受。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around the park with my friends. We would race each other, which made those afternoons really fun.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 25.0Sugestão: 目前回答的意思不够清楚,句子有多处语法错误,也没有明确回答自行车现在是否流行。注意:泛指自行车时用复数“bikes”;“小时候”可以说“when I was a child”;表达现在人们使用较少,可说“people don’t use them as often”。请先明确表明看法,再用一个原因或具体场景支持观点。
Exemplo: I think bikes are still popular in my country, especially in cities with bike-sharing services. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and help them avoid traffic.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
问题问的是过去的情况(Did you have…?),所以肯定回答应使用助动词 did,而不是现在完成时中的 have。回答过去时的一般疑问句时,可用“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”
× This is a wonderful time for me.
✓ It was a wonderful time for me.
这句话描述的是童年时期的经历,语境是过去,因此应使用过去式 was,而不是现在式 is。描述已经结束的过去经历时,要保持过去时态一致。
× Personally I think bike was popular in my child childhood
✓ Personally, I think bikes were popular in my childhood.
这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物,应使用复数 bikes。复数主语 bikes 要搭配 were。表达“在我的童年时期”时用 in my childhood,不需要在 childhood 前加 child。泛指一类可数名词时,通常可使用复数形式。
× but now people. Often used by people do not. Doesn't often use bike.
✓ but people don't often use bikes now.
原文把后半部分拆成了不完整的句子,且词序混乱,无法形成清楚、完整的表达。可将意思合并为“people don't often use bikes now”。people 是复数主语,因此否定句使用 don't;表达一般情况时,often 放在 don't 后、实义动词 use 前。