Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答“有”，并统一使用过去时，例如把“do have”改为“had”。第二句的语法不完整，可改为“I used to ride it with my friends”，并用一两个具体细节说明你们去哪里或有什么感受。避免重复使用“with this bike”，也可以用“it”代替。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a yellow bike when I was a child. I used to ride it with my friends around my neighbourhood and explore nearby streets. I still remember those rides fondly because they made me feel independent.

Sugestão: 先明确回答自行车是否普及，然后解释香港人口密集、道路繁忙等原因。避免重复“use bike”，并注意表达应为“it is difficult for people to use bikes”或“people find it difficult to cycle”。“as a means of transport”比“as a transportation”自然；也可以提到香港人通常使用公共交通，而不只是摩托车。

Exemplo: I wouldn’t say bikes are very popular for getting around in Hong Kong. The streets are crowded, and public transport is much more convenient for most people. However, some people do enjoy cycling in parks or in the New Territories.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child and it was the yellow one and this gives me a lot of memories.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was yellow, and it gives me a lot of memories.

这里描述的是童年时拥有自行车的经历，因此应使用过去式 had，而不是现在式 do have。后半句的 gives 可以保留，因为它表达这辆自行车现在仍会勾起回忆。

× When I'm used to hanging with my friend with this bike and explore different places with this bike.

✓ I used to hang out with my friends and explore different places on this bike.

原句以 When 引导从句，却没有主句，因此是句子片段。此外，be used to doing 表示“习惯于做某事”，不适合表达过去经常做的事。表达过去的习惯应使用 used to + 动词原形，例如 used to hang out。

× People are hard to use bike to use bike to as a transportation so instead of bike people usually take the motorcycle.

✓ People find it difficult to use bikes as a means of transportation, so they usually use motorcycles instead.

People are hard to use... 的句型结构不自然；要表达“人们觉得做某事很困难”，可以说 People find it difficult to...。原句还重复了 use bike，并多用了一个 to；改写后删除重复部分，并使用清晰完整的句子结构。

× People are hard to use bike to use bike to as a transportation so instead of bike people usually take the motorcycle.

✓ People find it difficult to use bikes as a means of transportation, so they usually use motorcycles instead.

bike 和 motorcycle 泛指交通工具时，通常使用复数形式 bikes 和 motorcycles，或在单数名词前加冠词。transportation 是不可数名词，不能说 a transportation；可以说 transportation，或使用 a means of transportation。