Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly in the past tense: say that you had a bike. Use natural phrases such as “gave it to me as a birthday present,” “a pink bike,” and “whenever I had the chance.” Add one specific detail about riding with your father, and finish with a natural reflection such as “I really enjoyed those rides.”

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave me a pink one for my eighth birthday, and it quickly became my favourite gift. Whenever I had the chance, I would ride it to the park with him. I really enjoyed those rides together.

Sugestão: Make your current opinion clear at the start, then explain the change with a relevant reason or comparison. Avoid repeating “at present” and “in the present time,” and replace unclear phrases such as “people they have like a feel” with a specific point, for example, that cars offer more comfort or protection from bad weather. Keep the answer to a few clear sentences.

Exemplo: Bikes are still popular in my country, especially for short trips and in smaller towns. However, more people are choosing cars these days because they are more comfortable and protect passengers from rain and heat. In busy cities, though, bikes can be more convenient because they are easier to park.

× I do have 1 and I remember when I was eight or nine years old, my father gave me that as my birthday gift.

✓ I did have one, and I remember that when I was eight or nine years old, my father gave me that as my birthday gift.

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past-tense auxiliary did rather than do. One is also the appropriate written form of the number here.

× It was like a pink color bike, which I like the most.

✓ It was a pink bike, which I liked the most.

Pink color is not the natural adjective form before bike. Use pink or pink-colored to describe the bike. The correction also uses liked to keep the description consistent with the past experience.

× Apart from that, whenever I used to get chance, I used to go to the park with my father and ride a bike.

✓ Apart from that, whenever I used to get a chance, I used to go to the park with my father and ride a bike.

Chance is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a chance when referring to an unspecified opportunity.

× That was really a fun time for myself.

✓ That was really a fun time for me.

Use the object pronoun me after the preposition for. The reflexive pronoun myself is generally used when the subject and object refer to the same person, or for emphasis.

× If I talk about past few decades, yes, but at present moment or in the present time, I would say cars are something which is becoming popular among all rather than bikes because people they have like a feel that the having a bike is relatable.

✓ If I talk about the past few decades, yes, but at the present moment or in the present time, I would say cars are something which is becoming popular among all rather than bikes because people they have like a feel that the having a bike is relatable.

Use the before past few decades and present moment because these expressions refer to a specific period of time.

× ...because people they have like a feel that the having a bike is relatable.

✓ ...because people have a feeling that having a bike is relatable.

Do not use people and they together as the subject of the same clause; people already serves as the subject. Also, remove the before having: the gerund phrase having a bike can function as a subject without that article. A feeling is the appropriate noun phrase here.