Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, 같은 표현을 반복하고 문장이 자연스럽게 마무리되지 않았습니다. ‘ride a bike’를 한 번만 사용하고, 처음 자전거를 배울 때의 어려움이나 기억을 구체적으로 덧붙여 보세요. 문법적으로는 ‘It wasn’t easy to learn’처럼 표현하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It wasn’t easy to learn how to ride it at first, but I remember feeling proud when I finally managed to ride on my own.

Sugestão: 인기 여부에 대한 답은 했지만, ‘Our country is’로 문장을 시작한 뒤 마무리하지 못했고 주어와 동사 형태가 맞지 않습니다. 자전거가 누구에게, 어떤 이유로 인기 있는지 한 문장으로 먼저 답하고, 함께 타면서 대화할 수 있다는 구체적인 이유를 연결어와 함께 설명해 보세요. 답변을 완결된 2~3문장으로 마무리하는 것이 좋습니다.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They often ride together because it’s a fun way to spend time with friends and chat while getting some exercise.

× it's not too easy process that learning the first time how to bike, how how to ride a bike

✓ It wasn't an easy process to learn how to ride a bike for the first time.

The student is describing a past experience from childhood, so the past form wasn't fits the context better than it's not. Use the infinitive phrase to learn after process to make the sentence grammatical.

× it's not too easy process

✓ It wasn't an easy process

The singular countable noun process needs an article. Use an before easy because easy begins with a vowel sound.

× Our country is, uh, when young people young people is always ride a bike

✓ In our country, young people always ride bikes.

The opening Our country is, when does not form a complete grammatical construction. Start with In our country, and state the general habit directly. Removing the repeated words also makes the sentence clearer.

× young people is always ride a bike

✓ young people always ride bikes

Young people is plural, so it cannot take the singular verb is. For a general habit, use the base verb ride with the plural subject.

× ride riding a bike is can be able to join together and then talk with each other

✓ Riding bikes can help them get together and talk with each other.

Do not use is together with can, and do not combine can with be able to because the expressions are redundant. Use can help followed by the base verbs get and talk.