Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly by saying whether you owned or rode a bike as a child. Clarify the timeline: you rode a bicycle at six and bought a scooter in eighth grade. Avoid the repeated, unfinished phrases, and use the past tense consistently (for example, “I didn’t own” and “I rode”).

Exemplo: I didn’t own a motorbike when I was a child, but I rode a bicycle from the age of six. When I was in eighth grade, I got a scooter. I enjoyed riding it to nearby places.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with one or two specific reasons or examples. Remove repeated words and use natural phrasing such as “many people own bikes” and “young people are interested in superbikes.” Finish your final thought, and use linking words such as “for example” or “also” to connect details.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in India because they’re a convenient way to get around. Many young people are especially interested in superbikes, such as Kawasaki models and the Suzuki Hayabusa. I enjoy riding, too, and sometimes go for a ride on my own.

× No, I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about the past, when you were a child, so use the simple past form didn't have. Match the tense of your answer to the time in the question.

× When I was in class 8 that time, I purchased Scooty.

✓ When I was in class 8, I purchased a scooter.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun scooter. Remove that time because it is redundant after the time clause. Use a lowercase common noun unless Scooty is the name of a specific model.

× Yes, but bikes are very much popular in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country.

Use very, not very much, to modify the adjective popular. Very much generally modifies verbs or certain participial adjectives.

× All of the all of the people in India are having a bike.

✓ All the people in India have a bike.

Use the simple present have to describe possession. Are having is not normally used for possession. Also remove the repeated phrase all of the.

× Most of the people young age people are liking the Super bikes like Ibusa, Kawasaki and many others.

✓ Most young people like superbikes such as the Hayabusa and Kawasaki models.

Use the simple present like for a general preference or habit. The present continuous are liking is not natural for this meaning. Use the simple present for general facts and preferences.

× Most of the people young age people are liking the Super bikes like Ibusa, Kawasaki and many others.

✓ Most young people like superbikes such as the Hayabusa and Kawasaki models.

The phrase people young age people repeats and misorders the description of the people. Put the age description before the noun: young people. For clearer examples, use such as before the names.

× I also like to ride bike uh.

✓ I also like to ride a bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before bike when referring to one bike in general. The filler uh is not needed in the corrected sentence.

× Many of the time I used to do this solo on the.

✓ Most of the time, I used to do this solo.

Use most of the time to describe something that happens on the majority of occasions. Many of the time is not the usual quantifier phrase. The final on the is incomplete, so omit it unless you add the missing information.