Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
No, actually I don't have a back when I was child because. Now I don't I don't know how to write a bag.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, bags is very popular in our in our country. You know our Coun. Our country have have a type of background. I mean, everyone shares the bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 25.0Sugestão: 先直接回答是否有自行车,再用一两句补充原因或相关经历。注意使用过去时:谈童年时用“didn’t have”;“骑自行车”说“ride a bike”,不是“write a bike”。避免重复,并确保句子完整、表达清楚。
Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I never learned how to ride one, so I usually walked or took the bus.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 开头直接说明自行车是否流行,并用具体信息解释原因,例如共享单车在城市中的普及情况。注意使用复数主语和正确的动词形式:“bikes are popular”“our country has”。避免重复,并用连接词让补充内容更连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they’re convenient and affordable.
× No, actually I don't have a back when I was child because.
✓ No, actually, I didn't have a back when I was a child.
句子谈的是童年时期的情况,时间由“when I was”明确限定在过去,因此“don't have”应改为过去式“didn't have”。
× No, actually I don't have a back when I was child because.
✓ No, actually, I didn't have a back when I was a child.
“child”是可数名词单数,前面需要冠词。这里应说“a child”。
× No, actually I don't have a back when I was child because.
✓ No, actually, I didn't have a back when I was a child.
句末的“because”表示后面还应接一个原因从句,但句子没有提供原因,结构不完整。若不补充原因,应删去“because”。
× Yes, bags is very popular in our in our country.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country.
复数主语“bikes”应搭配复数动词“are”,不能搭配“is”。另外,问题谈的是自行车,因此这里应使用“bikes”;“in our in our”是重复表达,删去重复部分即可。
× Our country have have a type of background.
✓ Our country has a type of background.
“Our country”是第三人称单数主语,一般现在时中动词应使用第三人称单数形式“has”,而不是“have”。“have have”属于重复表达,保留一个动词即可。