Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly and make the timeline clear. The phrase “Myron was just childhood” is difficult to understand, and “wish my father to go to take a bicycle” is not grammatically natural. Use past-tense expressions such as “I had” and “I wanted my father to buy me one.” Explain what happened when you rode it, using clear linking words and accurate phrases such as “I fell off” and “worried about my safety.”

Exemplo: Yes, I had a small bicycle when I was a child. I wasn’t very good at riding it, so I sometimes fell off. My father was worried about my safety, but he still encouraged me to practise.

Sugestão: Your answer gives a clear opinion and a reason, but clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorcycles and use the correct plural or article (“motorcycles” or “a motorcycle”). Replace “more terrible” with a specific explanation, such as “more tiring” or “harder to use,” and make sure the comparison is logical. Add one relevant detail, such as how people use motorcycles for commuting.

Exemplo: No, bicycles aren’t very popular in my country. Motorcycles are more common because they’re faster and more convenient for commuting, especially over long distances. Also, people don’t have to pedal, which can be tiring in hot weather.

× Yes, Myron was just childhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence does not form a clear, grammatical answer: 'was just childhood' is not a correct way to describe being a child. Based on the question, you could say, 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× I always wish my father to go to take a bicycle.

✓ I always wished my father would get me a bicycle.

The answer describes a childhood experience, so use the past-tense form 'wished.' Also, the structure 'wish my father to go to take' is awkward and ungrammatical here. Use 'wish + person + would + verb' to express what you wanted someone to do.

× So sometimes I always feel down on the road and my dad always very, uh, worry about my healthy.

✓ So I sometimes fell down on the road, and my dad was always very worried about my health.

Because you are describing childhood, use the past-tense verb 'fell' rather than 'feel.' 'Sometimes' and 'always' conflict in this context, so use one; 'sometimes' fits the meaning here. The clause about your dad needs the verb 'was,' followed by the adjective 'worried.' Use the noun 'health,' not the adjective 'healthy,' after 'my.'

× I think motorcycle is more popular in my country.

✓ I think motorcycles are more popular in my country.

When referring to motorcycles as a general category, use the plural noun 'motorcycles.' The plural subject also requires the plural verb 'are.'

× It's more terrible and very hard to people to use.

✓ It's more terrible and very hard for people to use.

Use 'for people' in the construction 'hard for someone to do something.' The preposition 'to' is not correct in this structure.