Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题，再补充具体的回忆。注意使用正确的过去时，例如“I had”和“I rode”；“bike”是自行车，不要说“back”。最后的“very realized”表达不自然，可以换成“a relaxing experience”或“a lovely memory”。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my dad in the early morning or at sunset. Those rides were relaxing, and I still remember them fondly.

Sugestão: 明确说明普通自行车和电动自行车的受欢迎程度，并用一两个具体细节解释原因。注意使用“bikes”和“e-bikes”，以及正确的动词“ride”；描述普遍现象时可用一般现在时，例如“people ride them to work”。

Exemplo: Traditional bikes aren’t as popular as they used to be, but e-bikes are very common in my country. Many people ride them to work and back home because they’re convenient and don’t require much effort.

× Yes, when I was a kid, I has a back and I always, uh, ride this back with my dad and, uh, in the sunrise or the sunset.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I had a bike and I always rode it with my dad.

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，应使用过去时。表示“有”应将 has 改为 had；表示“骑”应将 ride 改为 rode。

× Yes, when I was a kid, I has a back and I always, uh, ride this back with my dad and, uh, in the sunrise or the sunset.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I had a bike and I always rode it with my dad at sunrise or sunset.

表示“在日出或日落时”，通常用介词 at，而不是 in。可以记住常见表达“at sunrise”和“at sunset”。

× Uh back is not popular but eBack is very popular.

✓ Bikes are not popular, but e-bikes are very popular.

这里是在泛指自行车和电动自行车这两类事物，应使用复数名词 bikes 和 e-bikes，并搭配 are。

× Um and uh someone uh writes eback or rides back, uh, went to this office and uh go home.

✓ Someone rides an e-bike or a bike to the office and goes home.

bike 和 e-bike 在此处是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。e-bike 以元音音素开头，因此用 an；bike 前用 a。

× Um and uh someone uh writes eback or rides back, uh, went to this office and uh go home.

✓ Someone rides an e-bike or a bike to the office and goes home.

这里描述骑车通勤的一般情况，应使用一般现在时。went 是过去时，与句子表达的一般情况不一致，应改为 go；由于主语 someone 是第三人称单数，最终应使用 goes。

× Um and uh someone uh writes eback or rides back, uh, went to this office and uh go home.

✓ Someone rides an e-bike or a bike to the office and goes home.

主语 someone 是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时的动词要加 -s 或 -es。go 应改为 goes；同理，表示“骑”的动词应使用 rides。