Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答与问题不符：你提到了“bag（包）”，但考官问的是小时候有没有自行车。请先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再补充一个具体细节，例如谁给你买的、你在哪里骑车。注意使用过去时，如“rode”。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My mother bought me my first bike when I was about seven. I often rode it to school and around my neighbourhood.

Sugestão: 先明确回答现在自行车是否流行，再用原因或例子展开。你的回答谈到了过去，且“科技不太好”和“人们经常开车”之间逻辑矛盾；请说明具体原因，并使用正确时态。减少“uh”等填充词，也要避免以不完整的内容结尾。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, and many people use them for short trips or exercise.

× The bike was popular in my country when I was child.

✓ The bike was popular in my country when I was a child.

child 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里表示“我是一个孩子时”，应在 child 前加不定冠词 a。

× At that time, the technology is not very okay.

✓ At that time, the technology was not very okay.

At that time 指过去的时间，因此描述当时的情况应使用过去时。把 is 改为 was，使时态与过去时间状语一致。