Bike— Part 1 Relatório

PráticaPart12026-11-01 18:48:46

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, I have. It was very beautiful.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yes, sure, when I I'm a child I need to go to school by bike every day.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 回答直接,但要用过去时,因为问题问的是童年经历,应说 “Yes, I did”。“Beautiful” 通常不太适合形容自行车,可以具体描述颜色、外观或用途,例如它是什么颜色、你是否经常骑它。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. It was a bright red bike with a small basket at the front. I rode it around my neighbourhood almost every weekend.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: 先明确回答自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎,然后用具体原因或例子支持观点。避免 “when I I'm a child” 这种重复和时态混乱;可以说 “When I was a child”。此外,个人童年经历可以作为例子,但最好说明它如何体现自行车的普及程度。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. When I was a child, many of my classmates and I rode bikes to school every day because it was convenient and inexpensive.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题问的是“Did you have...?”,使用一般过去时。简短回答应沿用助动词 did,而不是现在完成时助动词 have。回答过去时的一般疑问句时,可用“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, sure, when I I'm a child I need to go to school by bike every day.

✓ Yes, sure. When I was a child, I needed to go to school by bike every day.

这里描述的是童年时的情况,应使用一般过去时:“I’m”应改为“was”,“need”应改为“needed”。“when I I'm”中重复出现了主语和be动词;表达“当我还是个孩子时”应说“when I was a child”。描述过去经常发生的事情时,动词也要使用过去式。

Vocabulário

Beautiful— Attractive
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