Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

I don't think so. Maybe in the past 10 years there were a lot of bikes in our countries. But now, you know, every family has more than two cars and we don't ride bikes that more often. So maybe we prefer motorbikes and E bikes.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.5Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 0.0

Sugestão: 你重复了考官的问题,没有直接作答。先用“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”明确回答,再补充一两个具体细节,例如什么时候骑、和谁一起骑,或为什么没有自行车。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 你表达了观点,也尝试说明原因,但部分表达不自然或不准确,例如“in our countries”应改为“in my country”,“that more often”可改为“as often”。“过去十年”与“现在”的时间关系也不够清楚。建议直接说明自行车是否流行,并用具体原因或例子支持观点;注意区分普通自行车、摩托车和电动自行车。

Exemplo: I don’t think traditional bicycles are as popular as they used to be in my country. Many families now own cars, so people often use them for longer journeys. However, electric bikes are still common, especially for short trips around town.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Maybe in the past 10 years there were a lot of bikes in our countries.

✓ Maybe in the past 10 years, there have been a lot of bikes in our countries.

“In the past 10 years”通常指从过去持续到现在的一段时间,因此通常搭配现在完成时。这里应将“there were”改为“there have been”。如果你想表达一个已经结束的过去时期,可以说“10 years ago”并使用过去时。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× Maybe in the past 10 years there were a lot of bikes in our countries.

✓ Maybe in the past 10 years there were a lot of bikes in our country.

题目问的是学生所在的一个国家,因此这里应使用单数“our country”,而不是复数“our countries”。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs(形容词或副词使用错误)

× We don't ride bikes that more often.

✓ We don't ride bikes that often.

“That often”表示“那么经常”,其中“that”修饰副词“often”。“More”在这里多余,应删去。若要表达“没有以前骑得那么频繁”,可以说“We don't ride bikes as often as we used to.”

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