Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
No, I don't have a bike when I was a child. Uh, my home is not far from the school. I usually went to school by work with my friend and I also don't really enjoy riding bikes.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Absolutely. You can find a lot of bikes in the street as a commuting method, and you can find a specific layer for the bikes. What's more, you may find a lot of shared bikes in the street, especially in some big cities.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 先直接回答问题,并注意用过去时描述童年经历:将 “I don't have” 改为 “I didn't have”。“by work”表达不正确;如果你们步行上学,应说 “walked to school”。另外,尽量删去填充词 “Uh”,并用 because 补充原因,让回答更自然、连贯。
Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My home was quite close to school, so I usually walked there with a friend. I also wasn’t particularly interested in cycling.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 62.0Sugestão: 回答切题,也提到了共享单车和大城市,是不错的具体细节。注意避免重复使用 “you can find”,并将 “a specific layer for the bikes” 改为更准确的 “dedicated bike lanes”。可以进一步说明人们骑车的原因,例如方便、便宜或适合短途通勤。
Exemplo: Absolutely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short commutes. Many cities have dedicated bike lanes, and shared bikes are easy to find in busy areas. They’re a convenient and affordable way to get around.
× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.
句子描述的是童年时期的情况,属于过去时间,因此要用一般过去时。将 “don't have” 改为 “didn't have”。建议留意句中的时间标志词(如 “when I was a child”),并确保动词时态与时间一致。
× I usually went to school by work with my friend and I also don't really enjoy riding bikes.
✓ I usually walked to school with my friend, and I also don't really enjoy riding bikes.
“by work” 不是表示步行上学的正确表达。若想表达“步行”,可以说 “walked to school” 或 “went to school on foot”。建议使用英语中固定、自然的交通方式表达。
× I usually went to school by work with my friend and I also don't really enjoy riding bikes.
✓ I usually went to school with my friend, and I also didn't really enjoy riding bikes.
这里谈论的是童年时期的经历,前面的 “went” 已经使用过去时,因此 “don't really enjoy” 也应改为过去时 “didn't really enjoy”。建议同一句中描述同一过去时间段的动作或感受时,保持时态一致。