Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Using my country they are very popular. I live in Germany and everyone has a bike and I see that every day someone rides a bike.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 5.0

Sugestão: Вы повторили вопрос экзаменатора вместо ответа, поэтому не сообщили никакой информации. Сразу ответьте «yes» или «no», а затем добавьте одну конкретную деталь, например, когда вы катались или где хранили велосипед.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around the park near my home.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: Ответьте на вопрос сразу: вместо неестественного «Using my country» скажите «In my country». Не утверждайте, что велосипед есть у каждого: это звучит слишком обобщённо. Также сократите повторение мысли о популярности и приведите конкретную причину или наблюдение. Для связи идей используйте, например, «because» или «for example».

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in Germany. Many people use them to commute because cycling is convenient in cities, and I often see cyclists on my way to work.

Gramática

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Using my country they are very popular.

✓ In my country, they are very popular.

Use in, not using, to describe something that is popular within a country. Say In my country when introducing this information.

Vocabulário

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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