Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child child.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Probably most people in my country prefer to drive cars rather than ride bicycles, because driving is more convenient for daily community community.. For example, the cities are quite spread out and public transport is not always reliable. So many families

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.5Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答直接,但“child”重复了一次,影响自然度。删去重复词,并补充一个简短的具体细节,例如你什么时候骑车或骑车做什么,让回答更完整。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 43.0

Sugestão: 观点清楚,也给出了城市距离远、公共交通不稳定这两个理由。不过,“community”重复且“daily community”用法不自然,可改为“daily commute”;句子末尾“So many families”没有说完,导致回答不完整。请删去重复内容,并用完整句子收尾。

Exemplo: I’d say bikes aren’t very popular in my country, as many people prefer to drive. Cars are more convenient for the daily commute, especially because cities are quite spread out and public transport isn’t always reliable. As a result, many families rely on cars for getting around.

Gramática

23: Sentence without a verb(句子缺少谓语动词)

× So many families

✓ So many families prefer to drive.

“So many families”只有主语,没有谓语动词,因此是句子片段。结合前文关于人们更喜欢开车的内容,可补上谓语“prefer to drive”,使句子完整。

Vocabulário

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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