Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中多次说“bag”，与问题中的“bike”不符，注意使用正确的关键词。先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充父母送车的时间、原因或你的感受。句子“ When I was in primary school.”不完整；“didn't expect it to receive a gift”和“they buy it for me”也有语法问题。可以说“didn't expect to receive a gift”和“they bought it for me”。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike for my birthday when I was in primary school. I was really surprised because I had only mentioned that I liked how it looked in an advertisement. I rode it around my neighborhood almost every day.

Sugestão: 请围绕“自行车”回答，而不是“bags”。先明确表明自行车在中国是否受欢迎，再用一两个具体原因展开，例如健身、环保或短途通勤。“improving increasing awareness”表达重复，可改为“people are becoming more aware of the importance of fitness”；“write backs”应为“ride bikes”，“get some calories burned”可自然地说“burn some calories”。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in cities. Many people ride them for short commutes because cycling is convenient and helps them stay fit. Bike-sharing services have also made it easier for people to get around.

× When I was in primary school.

✓ I was in primary school at the time.

原句是以“When”引导的时间状语从句，单独使用时不能构成完整句子。可以补上主句，或改成完整句“I was in primary school at the time.”

× I was so surprised at that time because I didn't expect it to receive a gift.

✓ I was so surprised at that time because I didn't expect to receive a gift.

“it to receive”表示“它收到礼物”，但这里想表达的是“我没想到会收到礼物”。删除多余的代词“it”，使用“expect to do something”结构。

× I only told them it looks beautiful on the advertisement, but they buy it for me.

✓ I only told them it looked beautiful in the advertisement, but they bought it for me.

这件事发生在过去，因此描述当时的外观应用过去时“looked”，而不是“looks”；父母当时买了礼物，应使用“bought”，而不是“buy”。

× I only told them it looks beautiful on the advertisement, but they buy it for me.

✓ I only told them it looked beautiful in the advertisement, but they bought it for me.

表示某物出现在广告内容中时，通常用“in the advertisement”，而不是“on the advertisement”。

× Nowadays, people are improving increasing awareness of physical fitness, so they tend to write backs to commute from their home to their workplace to get some calories burned.

✓ Nowadays, people are becoming increasingly aware of physical fitness, so they tend to ride bikes to commute from home to work and burn some calories.

“are improving increasing awareness”把两个动词形式直接叠在一起，结构不成立。可以改用“are becoming increasingly aware of...”来表达“越来越意识到……”。