Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is contradictory and repeats the same idea because “bike” and “bicycle” mean the same thing. Give a clear yes-or-no response, then add one relevant detail, such as why you did not have one or what you used instead.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family usually drove me to school, so I didn’t really need one.

Sugestão: You answer the question directly at first, but the rest contains unclear fragments and an unfinished sentence, which makes your meaning difficult to follow. Use complete sentences, avoid repeating “in my country,” and support your opinion with a specific example and a linking word such as “for example” or “because.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient, especially in busy cities.

× Mail Riding a bicycle in my country I believe most houses in my country have at least one bike.

✓ Riding a bicycle is common in my country. I believe most houses in my country have at least one bike.

The original combines an unclear fragment with two ideas without a clear sentence structure. Remove the stray word Mail and separate the ideas into complete sentences. Use a clear subject and verb in the first sentence.

× They are very.

✓ They are very popular.

Very is an adverb that needs to modify an adjective or another adverb; it cannot complete this sentence by itself. Add an appropriate adjective, such as popular, to complete the thought.