Bike— Part 1 Relatório

PráticaPart12026-10-31 22:07:29

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, I did. Well, at that time I didn't, uh, back.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

I think so. I think bags are popular in my country because, uh, this vocal is convenient in our. The way to go outside.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 30.0

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题,然后补充一两句具体信息,例如你什么时候开始骑车、通常在哪里骑。后半句表达不完整且与“Yes, I did”矛盾;避免犹豫词,并确保补充内容与答案一致。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 25.0

Sugestão: 注意听清题目关键词,并使用“bikes”而不是“bags”。用完整句子说明自行车为什么受欢迎,例如方便通勤或有助于避开交通拥堵;避免重复“I think”,并检查句子结构。

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient for short trips. They also help people avoid traffic and get some exercise.

Gramática

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Well, at that time I didn't, uh, back.

✓ Well, I didn't have one back then.

这里的“I didn't”后面缺少主要动词,且“back”不能单独表示“那时候”。可补上“have one”(有一辆自行车),并用“back then”表示“那时”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× I think bags are popular in my country because, uh, this vocal is convenient in our.

✓ I think bags are popular in my country because this vocal is convenient for us when we go outside.

“convenient”表示“对某人方便”时,通常用“convenient for someone”,所以应把“in”改为“for”。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× I think bags are popular in my country because, uh, this vocal is convenient in our.

✓ I think bags are popular in my country because this vocal is convenient for us when we go outside.

“our”是物主限定词,后面需要接名词;这里表达“对我们方便”,应使用宾格代词“us”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× The way to go outside.

✓ I think bags are popular in my country because this vocal is convenient for us when we go outside.

“The way to go outside”在这里是句子片段,没有完整的谓语结构,不能独立表达完整意思。可将其改为“when we go outside”,并与前面的主句连接。

Vocabulário

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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