Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答切题，也提到了自行车的颜色和用途，但时态和句型错误较多。谈论童年经历时应使用一般过去时，例如“had”“was”“liked”；“I very like”应改为“I really liked”，“write it”应为“rode it”。另外，“I take it ever”表达不清楚，可以换成具体的骑行地点或回忆。建议先直接回答，再补充一两个具体细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was pink, and I really liked it because it was my first bike. I often rode it around my neighborhood and to the park.

Sugestão: 回答有明确观点，并用公共自行车解释了原因，但填充词“uh”过多，影响流畅度。“don't have bike”和“ride bike”前应加冠词或改用复数；“when they are during their working”表达不自然，可说“when they commute to work”。建议进一步说明公共自行车如何方便人们，并用“for example”“because”等连接表达组织答案。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people use public bikes because they are convenient and affordable. For example, commuters can ride one to a bus stop or to work.

× I have a bike when I were a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

这段话描述的是童年经历，应使用过去时。have 的过去式是 had；be 动词与 I 搭配时用 was。

× I were a child.

✓ I was a child.

过去时中，be 动词要与主语保持一致。主语 I 应搭配 was，而不是 were。

× I very like this bike.

✓ I really liked this bike.

very 通常不能直接放在普通动词 like 前修饰它。可以用 really 放在动词前，也可以说 liked it very much。由于这里讲的是童年经历，like 也应使用过去式 liked。

× because it's my first bike.

✓ because it was my first bike.

这里描述的是过去拥有的第一辆自行车，因此用过去式 was，而不是现在时 is。

× It's pink.

✓ It was pink.

句子描述童年那辆自行车的颜色，应使用过去式 was。

× I take it ever.

✓ I took it everywhere.

ever 表示“曾经”或用于某些疑问、否定语境，不能表达“到处”。要表达“我骑它去很多地方”，应使用 everywhere。此处讲的是过去的经历，take 也要改为过去式 took。

× I write it to many places.

✓ I rode it to many places.

表达过去骑车去很多地方时，应使用 ride 的过去式 rode。write 意为“写”，不符合这里的语境。

× Some people don't have bike.

✓ Some people don't have a bike.

bike 是单数可数名词，泛指“一辆自行车”时，前面需要加不定冠词 a。

× They want to ride bike.

✓ They want to ride a bike.

bike 是单数可数名词，泛指骑一辆自行车时，应在 bike 前加 a。

× when they are during their working or go to school.

✓ when they are working or going to school.

during 后面通常接名词，不能这样与 are 连用；而且 or 连接的两个动作应保持结构平行。这里可以用 are working 和 are going to school。