Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再说明你小时候有滑板。注意用词准确：这里应说“bike”，不是“bag”；讲过去经历时使用过去式，如“got”“played”“went”。删去重复的“when I was”，并用“and”或“so”清楚连接细节。

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I got a skateboard when I was seven, and I used to ride it with my friends after school. We often went to the park to practise tricks together.

Sugestão: 开头直接表明自行车是否受欢迎，并补充具体理由或例子。表达“我很少看到有人骑自行车”时，可以说“I don’t often see people riding bikes”，不要用“see anyone to play it”；“玩手机”可说“use their phones”，而不是“play their phones”。

Exemplo: I don’t think bikes are very popular where I live. I rarely see people riding them, especially in the city. Many people prefer using their phones or taking public transport to get around.

× No, I didn't get a bag when I was child, but I get a skateboard when I was when I was 7 years old and I always prayed, played it with my friends after school and we will go to the park and practice tricks together.

✓ No, I didn't get a bag when I was a child, but I got a skateboard when I was 7 years old, and I always played it with my friends after school. We would go to the park and practice tricks together.

“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要加不定冠词“a”，所以应说“a child”。

× No, I didn't get a bag when I was child, but I get a skateboard when I was when I was 7 years old and I always prayed, played it with my friends after school and we will go to the park and practice tricks together.

✓ No, I didn't get a bag when I was a child, but I got a skateboard when I was 7 years old, and I always played it with my friends after school. We would go to the park and practice tricks together.

这段话描述的是童年时发生或反复发生的事情，应使用过去时。“I get”应改为“I got”。“we will go”也不符合过去的叙述时间；表达过去反复会去公园时，可以用“we would go”。

× Not very because I usually see anyone to play it.

✓ Not very, because I don't usually see anyone riding them.

“see”表示看到某人正在做某事时，后面通常接“宾语 + 动词-ing”，所以这里应说“see anyone riding”，而不是“see anyone to play”。谈论骑自行车时，“ride”比“play”更合适。

× Not very because I usually see anyone to play it.

✓ Not very, because I don't usually see anyone riding them.

这里谈论的是复数的“bikes”，所以代词应使用“them”，不能用单数“it”。此外，在否定句中使用“anyone”是合适的，因此补上“don't”后句意更清楚。

× Most people just play their phones.

✓ Most people just play games on their phones.

表示“在手机上玩游戏”时，常用结构“play games on their phones”。“play”后不能直接接“their phones”来表达这个意思；这里需要介词“on”。