Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

No, I didn't, because my parents think it is perhaps to my save and they wish I can.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yes, I think because I can see back everywhere and it is good for environment

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 30.0

Sugestão: 回答开头直接说明没有自行车。后半句表达不清,注意使用正确的词和时态:可以说父母觉得骑车不安全(unsafe),所以不让你骑。补充一个具体原因即可,例如担心你受伤。

Exemplo: No, I didn’t. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride a bike, so they didn’t let me have one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: 先直接回答“是的,我认为很受欢迎”,不要用“Yes, I think because”连接。注意表达“到处都能看到自行车”可说“see bikes everywhere”,并在“environment”前加定冠词“the”。可以补充一个具体原因,例如自行车环保、方便通勤。

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I see them everywhere, especially in busy city centres, because they’re an environmentally friendly and convenient way to get around.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue — 过去时错误

× No, I didn't, because my parents think it is perhaps to my save and they wish I can.

✓ No, I didn't, because my parents thought it might be unsafe for me, and they wouldn't let me have one.

回答谈的是童年时的情况,因此应将一般现在时 think 改为过去时 thought。修改后的整句也保持了与过去语境一致的表达。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs — 形容词或副词使用错误

× No, I didn't, because my parents think it is perhaps to my save and they wish I can.

✓ No, I didn't, because my parents thought it might be unsafe for me, and they wouldn't let me have one.

这里需要表达“对我来说不安全”,应使用形容词 unsafe。原句中的 save 是动词,不能在这里表达“安全”;可以记住 safe/unsafe 是形容词,常用于描述某事是否安全。

4: Modal verb usage — 情态动词使用错误

× No, I didn't, because my parents think it is perhaps to my save and they wish I can.

✓ No, I didn't, because my parents thought it might be unsafe for me, and they wouldn't let me have one.

原句中的 can 不适合表达父母不允许我骑车这一过去情境。可以用 wouldn't let me 表达“当时不让/不允许我”,并用 let + 人 + 动词原形(let me have)。

26: Sentence structure errors — 句子结构错误

× Yes, I think because I can see back everywhere and it is good for environment

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular because I can see bikes everywhere, and they are good for the environment.

I think 后面需要补出完整的想法内容,例如 bikes are popular。because 引导原因从句,说明为什么认为自行车受欢迎。回答时可以使用“主句 + because + 原因”的完整结构。

17: Incorrect use of the definite article — 定冠词使用错误

× Yes, I think because I can see back everywhere and it is good for environment

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular because I can see bikes everywhere, and they are good for the environment.

environment 在这里指我们共同生活的自然环境,通常说 the environment。记住表达“对环境有好处”时使用 be good for the environment。

Vocabulário

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
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