Bike— Part 1 Relatório
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Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yeah, absolutely. I still can vividly remember that because, uh, there was a bug from my mom as a birthday gift and I learned how to ride when I was quite little, about like 6 years old.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Good job! - You answered the question directly and gave a reason (convenience), which is good for coherence and relevance. - Your idea about bike-sharing adds a useful example. Improvement suggestions: - Make your answer more concise and more fully developed (2–3 clear sentences).
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Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Answering directly and adding a childhood memory are good choices. However, “there was a bug from my mom” is unclear; say “I got a bike from my mom.” Avoid fillers such as “uh” and redundant wording such as “about like.” Use two or three clear sentences and include a specific detail about learning to ride.
Exemplo: Yes, I did. My mom gave me a bike for my sixth birthday, and I learned to ride it soon afterward. I remember feeling proud when I finally managed to ride without help.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 5.0Sugestão: This response does not answer whether bikes are popular in your country; it appears to be feedback rather than an answer. State your opinion directly, then support it with a relevant reason and, if possible, a specific example such as bike-sharing or commuting.
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. They are convenient for short trips, and many people use shared bikes to get to work or connect to public transport.
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