Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I have a bike when I were a child. Uh, I really like it riding a bike, umm, I learn riding a bike in early age. Also, umm, it was so interesting.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, of course. I think bikes are popular in my country because. In my city we have. Ways for bikes and you can hire bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: Ответ дан по теме, но в нём много пауз и грамматических ошибок. Используйте прошедшее время: “I had”, “I was”, “I learned”. После “like” употребляйте форму с -ing (“like riding”), а вместо “learn riding” скажите “learned to ride”. Ответьте прямо, затем добавьте конкретную деталь — например, где вы катались или почему это занятие вам нравилось. Избегайте повтора и ограничьтесь двумя-тремя связными предложениями.
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it at an early age, and I often rode it around my neighborhood. I enjoyed it because it was fun and gave me a sense of freedom.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 38.0Sugestão: Выражение “Yes, of course” подходит, но объяснение прерывается незавершёнными фразами (“because”, “we have”). Сформулируйте причину полным предложением и используйте точные выражения: “bike lanes” — велосипедные дорожки и “bike-sharing services” — сервисы проката велосипедов. Добавьте конкретную деталь о том, почему люди пользуются велосипедами, и соедините идеи словами “because” или “also”.
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. In my city, there are bike lanes, and people can also rent bikes through bike-sharing services. They are a convenient and affordable way to travel short distances.
× Yes, I have a bike when I were a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
The question asks about a past time, so use the past-tense form had instead of have.
× Yes, I have a bike when I were a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
The subject I takes was, not were, in this past-tense clause. Remember the irregular past forms: I was, you were.
× I really like it riding a bike.
✓ I really liked riding my bike.
The student is describing a childhood experience, so the verb should be in the past tense: liked.
× I really like it riding a bike.
✓ I really liked riding my bike.
The verb like can be followed by a gerund, but not by it before the gerund in this construction. Say like riding a bike or like to ride a bike.
× I learn riding a bike in early age.
✓ I learned to ride a bike at an early age.
The sentence describes something that happened during childhood, so use the past-tense form learned.
× I learn riding a bike in early age.
✓ I learned to ride a bike at an early age.
After learn, use the infinitive with to when describing a skill: learned to ride, not learned riding.
× I learn riding a bike in early age.
✓ I learned to ride a bike at an early age.
The established phrase is at an early age, not in early age. Use at with this age expression.
× I learn riding a bike in early age.
✓ I learned to ride a bike at an early age.
The singular countable noun age needs an article in this expression: an early age.
× I think bikes are popular in my country because.
✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because, in my city, we have bike lanes and you can hire a bike.
Because introduces a subordinate clause and cannot end the sentence without the reason. Add the reason in the same sentence.
× In my city we have. Ways for bikes and you can hire bike.
✓ In my city, we have bike lanes, and you can hire a bike.
The period incorrectly separates we have from its object, leaving an incomplete sentence. Keep the related words together and join the ideas with and.
× Ways for bikes and you can hire bike.
✓ In my city, we have bike lanes, and you can hire a bike.
Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article here: a bike.