Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, I had one before.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

It was popular in the 1990s, nineteen 90s.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 你直接回答了问题,但“had one before”表达比较含糊,也不太自然。可以明确说明小时候是否拥有自行车,并补充一个具体细节,例如骑车的地点或频率。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 35.0

Sugestão: 问题询问的是自行车现在是否受欢迎,因此要用一般现在时直接回答,而不是只谈过去。“in the 1990s”重复表达了同一时间;可以补充如今人们骑车的原因或常见场景。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people ride them for short trips because they’re convenient and inexpensive.

Gramática

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× It was popular in the 1990s, nineteen 90s.

✓ They were popular in the 1990s.

“Bikes”是复数名词,应该用复数代词“they”指代,并搭配“were”,不能用单数代词“it”和“was”。另外,“in the 1990s”和“nineteen 90s”意思重复,保留一种说法即可。

Vocabulário

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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